Reviews for In Our House, It Was Sorry |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story...though i think there was scope for a little more romance maybe... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Imagine James Potter keeping a diary. I liked the idea and well-done. And the emotions are deep. This should have more views/reviews! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this story. It was very interesting to get a deeper, open minded version of James. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually love this story. If there are mistakes, I either didn't catch them or I forgot about them. This is so wonderfully sweet and romantic without the kiss that most people seem to think this moment (the moment Lily and James figure out how they feel about each other) needs. It really isn't required, as you've expertly showed here. And you said your older work wasn't as good. I love one-shots, and Lily and James are my...second favorite Harry Potter couple. :) Good job again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really really liked this oneshot! it was very well written and i loved how much of it was from James' point of view (obviously, seeing as how it was his diary) i really liked the explanations you gave behind James' arrogant behaviour and the way you worked the song lyrics into it. fantastic work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. Just...beautiful. I really have nothing to say. I am gobsmacked at how wonderful that story was. I loved the quotes. I loved the way you wrote James, I think it was perfect. Thank-you so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was... really sad and good and adorable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh froggie *tears* that was beautiful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh this was so wonderful I love how it was a songfic, but not really. Just the right mix of song and fic. Perfect. And whoa, you really delved way down into James didn't you? Fantastic job. I feel like everything you wrote is exactly how he would be way down deep. This is amazingly outstanding. |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazingly awesome story! it was so sweet! and the lyrics fit the story so well! great job! |
![]() ![]() the story is absolutly amazing! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it, beautifully written ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I loved this! I really truly loved every sentence of it! I think you have their characters so perfectly figured out, I like the way you explained James' change through his diary entries. I don't thik this was boring at all, it was fascinating, so much so that I read it in one satisfying gulp. Congratulations on such a wonderful piece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing. if only boys in real life were that...perceptive. most of them are oblivious to everything. again, amazing. |