|Reviews for A Valium Incident, A Valium Plan|
| Natt774 chapter 3 . 5/12/2016
...Review got too long. Skip first two paragraphs.
I can imagine the real Fang reading this fic incredulously. 'Is that how I’m depicted?' he mutters. Totally crazy about Max and emo? Then Gazzy says, ‘Fang, cut the Parcheesi. You know that fic expressed how you truly are...’ 'Deep down inside!' Iggy crows, finishing the thought. Over Fang's shoulder, Gazzy had been reading your fic aloud to the Flock with nice sound effects and voice changeovers [by the way, I’m not entirely sure what Parcheesi means, but it sounds impressive.] Iggy is too suave to be embarassed over a story of him singing fast food songs. He has farting contests with the Gasman after all.
Fang, having an ego boost lately from his blog cult, puffs his chest out. 'I'd never be an idiot like that,' he says stiffly. Girly giggles ensue. 'Too bad. The Fang in that fic was my type, ' Max says wryly, as Angel and Nudge continue to snicker behind her. The girls are sitting across from the boys, behind the campfire. Angel crawls over to sit on Max's lap. 'Ah, putz,' Total says, grinning toothily at Fang. Fang gazes steadily at Max, the pink flush on his neck masked by the the firelight. 'Fang's a lot more funny in the fics,' Gazzy comments. Fang's irked while everyone else in the Flock nods concurrently.
That's what I was thinking right after finishing your fic. I liked it best how you incorporated all the Flock members in your story; more comedy instead of just FAX. You made Iggy be Cinderella at one point (I do all the cooking, cleaning, get ordered around by a 6-year-old deviant). Angel watching out for Max's feelings because they've got their special bond [she could care less about Fang's feeling's, really; 'Je t'aime. T'es l'amour de ma vie,' Gazzy croons to Max while impersonating Fang; that was the cheesiest line I could think of]. Nudge the scatterbrain. And Gazzy, the most dependable, gutsy, eccentric kid in the Flock. Max is usually my favorite, but the little guy really shone in your fic (at least to me).
| Natt774 chapter 2 . 5/12/2016
The Gasman's my favorite here! I've always felt he's been underestimated in the M. Ride canon. He's like, 'ma soeur est incroyable,' (my sister is the best!) in this chapter and then, 'Iggy, écoute-moi. Les filles sont trop folles. Nous devons obéir.' (Iggy, listen to me. The girls are crazy. We must go along with whatever they're scheming). [When I think dramatic, I think French. It's an illogical story]. So fun.
***these are rough translations by the way.
| StarGirl909 chapter 14 . 5/30/2012
Omg I love this!
| VampChick76 chapter 14 . 11/25/2011
Awesome story! Very cute!
| fnickforever chapter 14 . 9/3/2011
Okay, that was insanely adorable, not gonna lie. I especially liked the ending. You did so well on it! Good job :)
| AvrilSays chapter 14 . 5/15/2010
Wait. Angel and Iggy? There's, like, an eight year difference!
| Teehee Tummytums chapter 14 . 3/29/2010
that was hilarious! I couldn''t stop laughing! The last chapter was a little confusibg though...
| SlupinLove chapter 10 . 12/31/2009
Dang those cursed bambi eyes! :P
Still good! minor spelling issues (sorry today i am caught up on spelling)
| SlupinLove chapter 7 . 12/31/2009
Ah Valium how i love thee!
Good job! minimal spelling errors, good sentence fluency.
GOOD GAlOSHES I SOUND LIKE A TEACHER!
keep up the good work!
| yourfriendlyneighborhoodturtle chapter 14 . 12/20/2009
Lolz, best fanfiction I've read.
| Kina Kalamari chapter 14 . 11/19/2009
Excellent story. Very entertaining. A great read. Nice job. ) Sorry my review isn't more interesting...
| writerreader63 chapter 13 . 9/30/2009
i love this!
| zebrasdancing chapter 14 . 8/28/2009
| Rogha chapter 13 . 8/11/2009
I woulda voted Total.
| DreamsOfFlying chapter 14 . 7/26/2009
Oh God this was hilarious! One of the best stories on FF. Great job! :)