Reviews for Overlord Shinji
Legionnas chapter 1 . 2/24
Is the orb supposed to be Gnarl?
goddragonking chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more updates soon and Really awesome story, can't wait to read more:)
masterart chapter 11 . 1/11/2014
what next chapter?
Count Sinner chapter 12 . 7/25/2013
In the game are actually 8 heroes. One falls and almost dies and heals and become the overlord. The 8th hero should want revenge on the other heroes for leaving him for dead.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/1/2013
Ah you kinda left ranmas name in this chapter
Wrath the Fallen One chapter 11 . 6/12/2013
great story all the way please update
Shadow chapter 12 . 3/18/2013
Yeah since it was censored on my review i am just going to say it in Japanese, paizuri fetish. Anyway please update
Shadow chapter 12 . 3/18/2013
The Rei Kunoichi could have a titty fuck fetish. Oh and please update this story.
Guest chapter 12 . 2/16/2013
continue loving the fanfic STORY
Guest chapter 2 . 2/16/2013
nice lol
Fat Gnat chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
lolcopypasting all up in dis fic.
jabbarulez chapter 12 . 8/20/2012
i'm getting confused about the many girls. you cleared up the minion girls but who are all the unique/singular girls and what are their positions? if you can clear that up any i'd be grateful!
Primus2021 chapter 11 . 7/15/2012
Will you be adding Hikari Horaki, Satsuki Ooi, Kaede Agano, and Aoi Mogami?

and Mari Illustrious Makinami is still missing from the first 2 or 3 chaps, what is up with that?
Primus2021 chapter 10 . 7/15/2012
I do remember that Mari was there when Asuka Rei, and Shinji, 'woke up', Mari even went to the rock quarry with Asuka, so what ever happened to her, or did you forget about her?
Primus2021 chapter 7 . 7/14/2012
What happened to Mari?
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