Reviews for Deception
kitty-ally-93 chapter 3 . 8/18/2012
yah know u should really continue this story its good. w
Dreamers0rule0the0earth chapter 3 . 7/9/2008
I love this story! I wait for more!
Amayada chapter 3 . 4/16/2008
wo...rivalry...that's going to hurts poor Satoshi's pride...anyways sounds interesting...I can't wait to see what happens...and really I don't think Dark is that perverted nor that obvious and desperate to announce that he's single...haha :)
Yukino chapter 3 . 3/2/2008
Yay! I love this fanfic! Daisuke is so cute! Please update soon!
pokemonlover13 chapter 3 . 2/9/2008
jesse salinas chapter 3 . 2/5/2008
wow! so interesting i cant wait for the next chapter write faster i cant wait any longer and i bearly finished the 3rd chapter hury hury hury!1

sorry to be so demanding but that's what happens when your a good writer.
jesse salinas chapter 2 . 2/5/2008
hm it getting so good i cant wait to read the next chapter.

poor satoshi was he having an asma attack?

disuke is perverted he was watching satoshi in the bathroom lol.

i would do it to if i had wings (muhahahahahahahahaha)

you know you would do it to.

lol j/k
jesse salinas chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
oh my goodness its so interesting and it's only your first page.

good job!
StubbornTenshi chapter 3 . 1/19/2008
Gah! I love this fic! It's totally going on my favouites list when it's complete or maybe even before that! Very well done!
wind-master-redmoon chapter 3 . 1/5/2008
oh interesting
Dark Reborn chapter 3 . 1/4/2008
Oh no! Satoshi's being outsmarted! I'm looking forward to reading your next chapter. Please update! _
kahuffstix chapter 3 . 1/4/2008
haha, daisuke made a fool of the teach without even trying. i really liked this. it was really good. please add more soon.
wind-master-redmoon chapter 2 . 10/5/2007
oh that was a good chapter
kahuffstix chapter 2 . 9/28/2007
hehe, that was funny. i really liked this. it was really good. please add more soon.
wind-master-redmoon chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
this is interesting.
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