Reviews for The Dragon Phoenix
gearworks of ff chapter 10 . 6/12/2015
this is a good story but the spelling errors make it look
like it was written on a cellphone
gearworks of ff chapter 4 . 6/12/2015
spelling errors -lire- 'liar'
a good read other than some small punctuation and spelling errors
Jostanos chapter 20 . 10/22/2014
"Red and green... The funkiest thing you've ever seen. (Tell you what his name is) Party Man. PARTY MAN! Rules and regulations have no place in this nation... Party Man.. Party Man..." "Party Man" by Prince for the 1980's BATMAN starring Michael Keaton and Jack Nicholson (Bruce Wayne/Batman and Jack Napier/Joker respectively).

*shrugs* The above just came to me when I read Albus asking himself "B-black and white?"
Jostanos chapter 16 . 10/22/2014
"Crowed" is what Peter Pan did before he defeated Capt. Hook.
"Crowd" is a group of people.
Jostanos chapter 14 . 10/22/2014
One of the words that you were searching for is the word 'Doubt'.
'I doubt that Harry would like what the idiot has done. In fact he may go ballistic.'

"Predjudice" is another word.. I think that even I have mis-spelled it. :P
Jostanos chapter 12 . 10/22/2014
*sighs* 'There' is a location.
'They're' is 'They Are'.
"Their" is possessive as in "The phoenix was theirs to begin with."

"They're over there with their feline friend." is an example sentence using all three.
Jostanos chapter 10 . 10/22/2014
*sighs* A 'Lyre' is a musical instrument.
A "Lair" is where Lugia , some animals/pokemon, and evil masterminds/super villans/scientists live.
'Winged to himself'? Are you sure that you didn't mean 'sighed to himself'?

Just askin'. :)
Jostanos chapter 9 . 10/22/2014
*coughs* You have been mis-spelling words from the beginning.

"Lier", technically, isn't a word.
"Liar" is the word that you were searching for.

"Cleaver" is both a kitchen utensil and a weapon.
"Clever" is what a person may be. Hermione is a clever witch.
Hagi's Replacement chapter 19 . 5/19/2014
the Key of the Twilight is something that brings the ".Hack/" series to mind I see a bunch of minor errors in the story but can figure out what is actually being said. However it does make some of the story harder to read...
BikerSHAM chapter 33 . 4/29/2014
A bit jumpy, with all the different story-lines, but I like this Plot your going with !

Keep up the Great work !

/Salute, Sham... 8-)
hellz swordsman chapter 33 . 4/28/2014
I love this story glad u updated it.
shugokage chapter 33 . 4/26/2014
Interesting chapter good job!
harlequin320 chapter 33 . 4/26/2014
great chapter as always, its getting rather absurd with how many universes you are mashing together, its going to be quite a challenge to make the Xovers work, good luck in that as I love this story and want to see it do well, keep up the good work, update soon
knight of Eclipse chapter 2 . 12/13/2012
wow never expected harry to be saved by the Creevey's, i like it keep it up.
shugokage chapter 31 . 11/29/2012
Amazing and unique story good job!
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