Loving your series! Read through book 1 and 2; very enjoyable !

This has always been my favourite chapter. Never been a fan of Percy but this chapter just made me love him and see him in a totally different light. I wish every Percy in fandom was like this Percy.

I found your story yesterday and am enjoying them.

Good stuff. Thanks for a great (re)ead!

This. does not. fly.

If Snape was "only trying to keep his cover", HE WOULD NOT BE ACTING LIKE AN ASS TO DO IT.
He's supposed to be a double agent. Acting in a way that makes even twelve year old children regard you as Suspect Number One when something Dark goes down ***is not how you maintain a low profile.*** Voldemort, crazy as he was, would take one look at Snape's childish bullying and sadistic behavior and go "this idiot WANTS to be caught working for the Dark Side!"

So bloody sick of "fans" trying to redeem the irredeemable.

Hermione: "But without a proper teapot, where do you Americans put your tea?"

Harry: "IN THE HARBOR." *little american flags pop out of his hat, waving wildly.*

I don't care for the"Gred / Goerge" treatment, I don't recall it use in the books.

Started Great - turned to cliched shit at the sorting.

I would have really complained about Malfoy not losing points after starting the confrontation and then starting the fight by drawing his wand. Detention and points for threatening another student

Harry should have pushed it a bit, especially about the attitude and treatment.

Not fond of tales that are just Canon rewritten. Keep up on twisting things. Like to see where you take things. I'm a bit surprised the parents gave in so easily to Harry going to Scotland. (I know it's part of the tale). It makes me want to ask a few questions. Just why would two British School teachers interrupt their lives, and their preparations for the next school year, and go all the way to America to convince one kid to go to their school, and obviously ignore a second powerful girl (the tornado) by not inviting her. Why would Harry leave his ultralight, and his horses, and his friends? Who is going to take over his chores, when they all have busy farm lives? Cow, goat, all the guinea pigs, horses, maintenance on the plane-its not good for it to just sit unused. No piano? Just uproot a life and change it that much, for a castle? Castles are cool, but is it worth the trade off? Not cheap either. just makes me wonder, but then I'm a grumpy great grandparent, and nastily suspicious of things. bet his nifty mag light doesn't work well, or long. Keep that Buck knife handy.

Hmmm ... the explanation seems to be going towards the Old Ways. But we'll see.
And now we're about to start a boy band. Oh, dear. ;)

Cannon is a gun. Canon is what you want when referring to a set corpus of literature.

You mean Boy Scout, not Cob Scout. Earlier Harry claimed to have 18 merit badges, only two away from an Eagle Scout, which is a Boy Scout Rank. Cub Scouts is for younger kids.

Why didn't Harry try to write a letter to Sirius? There are plenty of reasons why Sirius might not have found that letter other than death or incarceration. For instance, he could have simply never tried to open James' trunk, thinking he already knew what was in it. Or maybe because he wasn't a Potter he couldn't get it unlocked. And why didn't Harry try on the ring?