Reviews for Tangled in Death
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 1 . 7/12
Really hoping you do continue this, your work for Nanao's Zanpakuto is much more interesting than what they did in canon
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 9 . 7/10
Nice scenes where they achieve Bankai...and Naruto worrying about a hole in his mind

Good work with Gin, playing away and then ruthlessly cutting off Naruto from taking the advantage. Even better with Nanao attacking Gin right off
Slight typo that you have two Kido 63

Really liked the whole scene with Naruto unleashing Bankai, from his emotions, Gin's reaction, the description, everything!

At first I thought you meant Kurama appeared, thanks for clarifying it is Komamura

Really hope you get back into this!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 8 . 7/10
Very good explanation from Naruto on why he went easy on Naruto, and nice rematch. Also good point that Ichigo having actual Shinigami powers should have affected Rukia's sentence

LOL jealous Nanao
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 7 . 7/10
Thanks for clarifying on why the cover for Urahara's exile was justifiable, implying that he meant for that brand of gigai to harm shinigami sent to earth

Mentioning the low life expectancy of Shingami in service of their duty also makes it easier to forgive them for the abuses of power and how arrogant they can be. They have volunteered for a very serious and dangerous life after all, so the self-sacrifice should be respected. In the manga it was only mentioned in the beginning, and then the excesses seemed to take over
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 6 . 7/10
Your work on bankai is as insightful as what you did with shikai, particularly with Nano's, and again I wish we saw more of your related work with this in the manga, even if Naruto's is a bit silly (although still very amusing! X-D )

Good point on how weird it should have been for the shinigami that the protocol bound 46 suddenly started breaking laws and traditions over Rukia
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 4 . 7/10
LOL yes I can see Naruto fighting Kenpachi just to push himself as far as he can, with everyone thinking that is crazy

I think your work with shikai is my favourite thus far. Not only did you show the progression, but also show how similar they were and helping each other like that. Ichigo should talk to Zangetsu more often if only for advice like Naruto does here
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 3 . 7/5
Nice touch that against Kenpachi Naruto thinks he is doing badly, but is in fact actually doing surprisingly well. Also LOL at trying to prevent the rise of a 2nd Kenpachi Zaraki
Guest chapter 9 . 4/25
Ahh! This is so good! Please update soon! Also, you put two different chants for bakudo 63.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/19
You think Renji has a sucky Shikai? Ikaku is much worse off.
redwolf23456 chapter 9 . 5/25/2015
Great story so far
Juvart24 chapter 9 . 4/27/2015
Fun read wish it would get continued
starlineshine chapter 6 . 7/22/2014
Criticism: There isn't much detail. I mean, I like it, and it's good, there are just some blank spaces.
Comment: Yay Nanao and Naruto! And, is it just me, or will the canon characters be introduced soon? Ooh.
Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 9 . 7/1/2014
Aw, normally I don't go for these types of crossovers (mainly because they're not usually done well), but this had me laughing my head off. Very VERY sad you haven't updated this in what...7 years. Dang. *sigh* Hope life is going well with you.
SerasCain chapter 9 . 3/11/2014
Wow. Absolutely amazing buildup throughout this story. I love the story and the backstory you've created for this. The pacing is phenomenal. It makes me sad that you appear to have stopped writing for all your stories. I do hope you return one day because I have always enjoyed the stories you wrote. Your crack stories have me rolling and then I read this one and I find myself completely invested in the world you have made your own. Nanao was always cute but you gave her a great character and I love how you've placed Naruto into this universe so seamlessly.
red neo ranger chapter 9 . 12/15/2013
Loved it keep it up
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