|Reviews for Awakening|
| Mika the Dark princess chapter 3 . 9/18/2011
| ovoriel chapter 3 . 7/6/2011
this is a great story! please continue it!
| AnimusPatronus chapter 3 . 8/31/2008
Yes it did inspire me! Thanks for mentioning me. Loved the new chapter. Sorry it took so long to review! Update soon please!
| LiveLifeLikeNeverBefore chapter 3 . 8/14/2008
BRAVO! I adore it soo much! can't wait for the next chapter!
Luv from a Mutt.
| LiveLifeLikeNeverBefore chapter 2 . 8/14/2008
Luv from a Mutt.
| Gabryell-P chapter 3 . 8/2/2008
Yeah! I really like your fanfiction. I think Nicholas is really creepy.
I hope you didn't stop write it.
Can't wait for the next chapter (if there is a next chapter)
| 1Saturn1 chapter 3 . 8/1/2008
I loved this chapter, it was amazing. Plesae update soon
| sayaka nakamura chapter 3 . 6/20/2008
of course i like it! it makes a lot of sense too. i mean, its not like saya and diva just appeared, right? patiently waiting for the naxt update! :P
| ThunderRiver411 chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
This is a good story. I'm working on one too. Check it out when you have time.
| Ides of December chapter 3 . 6/13/2008
Keep writing, please.
"A bite of the grilled eel nearly gave her an orgasm"
OH MAH GAWD I DIED HERE. I HOPE YOU LIKED SPLITTING MY LUNGS. XD
I'm interested in this plot, but then, I have a little bit of criticism. Some dialogue lacks commas, and commas can help liven up the speech by adding a pause for dramatic effect.
Just a friendly thought.
| Ides of December chapter 2 . 6/13/2008
I'm liking more and more.
The way you write this is strikingly alike the series itself, and Saya's reasonings are very well-played.
I'm loving the romance
Hibiki and Kanade sound really, really cute. I'm just hoping nothing happens to them, now. And ZOMG I love Kai's actions.
On to the next chapter.
| Ides of December chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
I like how it's written, but somehow, I think it's a little rushed when Saya calls for Haji.
Other than that, on to the next chapter!
| Kusama Saya chapter 3 . 6/11/2008
I waited so long! I think...I can't tell...But update update! XD Haji getting a pillow thrown at.
| D-chi chapter 3 . 6/10/2008
but I am so confused. _
I thought Saya could only kill Diva and her Chevalier with her blood, and that she can only have children with Diva's Chevalier.
oh well. .;
| defunctaccount0000000001 chapter 3 . 6/10/2008
I like! Nice job.