Reviews for Awakening
Mika the Dark princess chapter 3 . 9/18/2011
Lov it
ovoriel chapter 3 . 7/6/2011
this is a great story! please continue it!
AnimusPatronus chapter 3 . 8/31/2008
Yes it did inspire me! Thanks for mentioning me. Loved the new chapter. Sorry it took so long to review! Update soon please!
LiveLifeLikeNeverBefore chapter 3 . 8/14/2008
BRAVO! I adore it soo much! can't wait for the next chapter!

Luv from a Mutt.
LiveLifeLikeNeverBefore chapter 2 . 8/14/2008
nicely done!

Luv from a Mutt.
Gabryell-P chapter 3 . 8/2/2008
Yeah! I really like your fanfiction. I think Nicholas is really creepy.

I hope you didn't stop write it.

Can't wait for the next chapter (if there is a next chapter)

Bye
simmie chapter 3 . 8/1/2008
I loved this chapter, it was amazing. Plesae update soon
sayaka nakamura chapter 3 . 6/20/2008
of course i like it! it makes a lot of sense too. i mean, its not like saya and diva just appeared, right? patiently waiting for the naxt update! :P
ThunderRiver411 chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
This is a good story. I'm working on one too. Check it out when you have time.
Ides of December chapter 3 . 6/13/2008
Keep writing, please.

"A bite of the grilled eel nearly gave her an orgasm"

OH MAH GAWD I DIED HERE. I HOPE YOU LIKED SPLITTING MY LUNGS. XD

I'm interested in this plot, but then, I have a little bit of criticism. Some dialogue lacks commas, and commas can help liven up the speech by adding a pause for dramatic effect.

Just a friendly thought.

Keep writing!
Ides of December chapter 2 . 6/13/2008
I'm liking more and more.

The way you write this is strikingly alike the series itself, and Saya's reasonings are very well-played.

I'm loving the romance

Hibiki and Kanade sound really, really cute. I'm just hoping nothing happens to them, now. And ZOMG I love Kai's actions.

On to the next chapter.
Ides of December chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
I like.

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I like how it's written, but somehow, I think it's a little rushed when Saya calls for Haji.

Other than that, on to the next chapter!
Kusama Saya chapter 3 . 6/11/2008
I waited so long! I think...I can't tell...But update update! XD Haji getting a pillow thrown at.
D-chi chapter 3 . 6/10/2008
Good chapter!

but I am so confused. _

I thought Saya could only kill Diva and her Chevalier with her blood, and that she can only have children with Diva's Chevalier.

oh well. .;
SingsWithWords chapter 3 . 6/10/2008
I like! Nice job.
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