|Reviews for Unravelled and Undone|
| mefreckles chapter 1 . 6/27/2017
I absolutely adore this story! It's a wonderful Norribeth Fic! I only wish it were longer so I could have more of this fabulous writing.
| littlemsstrawberry chapter 1 . 10/28/2016
I feel so sad for James in canon. He loves Elizabeth and gave up everything for her.
| Sleepy Lotus chapter 1 . 6/27/2016
Sigh. I cannot thank you ENOUGH for this fic, it's exactly what I've been looking for in the Norribeth fandom, and so hard to find! What a jewel! Your writing is magic, and I adore your depiction of these two in married life.
"It secretly amuses her to think that people would be shocked to know this side of James, the part of him that is demonstrative and loving, almost voracious in his needs for his wife. He hides it so well under the brocade and the stern brow, and that looking at him she would never know his thoughts until there is a flash of green eyes, and she is left breathless and longing."
SIGH! Haha. This is one of my absolute favorite fics! Good job!
| Rickmanlover24601 chapter 1 . 6/16/2016
3 James. Lovely one shot
| Rachel Smith Cobleigh chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
A fun portrait of Norrington, and easily within character. I like the evolution you describe between them
| Lilian Granger chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
Perfeito. Quem diria? Eles foram feitos um pata o outro. Mas agora ele está morto e ela passa dez anos esperando ter um amor por apenas um dia. Obrigada pela partilha. Eu amei ler isto.
| Merydhrae chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Wouah! Fantastic! I LOVE IT!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
| Nubian Queen chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Good read! I always liked Norrington better myself.
| Bain Sidhe chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
I can't stop reading this story. I've read it at least five times, if not more. I love, love, love, love this story. It is so James, and it is so how Elizabeth should've been, if she story hadn't demanded she run off with the pirates. I don't even know if you are still around to read reviews, but please know that this is my absolute favorite piece of Pirates fic. So erotic, so sensual, and so right.
| Miss Artemis chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
A wonderful Norribeth fic! Beautifully done - loved the subtle transition from obligation to want, from fondness to love. :) I can perfectly see the Norrington you pictured in this oneshot. The man has more layers than Elizabeth ever gave him credit for, and I believe she realized this when he kisses her before he died in "At World's End." (btw, I squealed in the movie theatre - at the time - when they kissed, but then promptly cried) I love this fic - it is bittersweet because this probably could have happened if just given a chance.
| ahoy chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
What a lovely story (and hot, of course). Your writing style is fantastic. You captured the characters brilliantly - especially James. I absolutely loved your James! Also loved the attention to details - like him still chewing limes... Brilliant! Overall a wonderful story I will surely save to read again. I'll also be reading your other stories :D
| visitmyao3writingramblr chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
*sigh* Wonderful. Loved it!
| Bookwyrm25 chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
I've been weirdly crushing on Norrington all this week. This was perfect. thanks. :)
| Bleak December chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
Steamy! Oh I love this other side of James you're exploring :) I like that you've decided to make him very demanding in intimacy, as well as having Elizabeth develop a little more forwardness as the marriage goes on. I was getting a little tired of the "demure Elizabeth" who only sat back and let James do all the initiating. Nice change of pace, while still keeping everyone in character!