Reviews for Clay and Puppets
junko chapter 37 . 6/14
theres 3 chapters left and the latest update was in 2013. this is despair in all its glory
KimicThranduilion chapter 10 . 12/28/2016
You write action scenes very well. So vivid I can clearly picture it all. Another great chap!
KimicThranduilion chapter 9 . 12/28/2016
Oh nice take on Deidara's eye - lovely little bit of head canon there. The relationship between the two is great as well. Sasori is his usual grumpy self with Dei being all bangs and enthusiasm. Great chapter
KimicThranduilion chapter 7 . 12/28/2016
I really like your portrayal of Kisame here - he is rather jovial for a missing nin isn't he? All great stuff so far. Can't wait to see what's up next.
KimicThranduilion chapter 4 . 12/27/2016
I'm loving the start of this story so far. Can't wait to read in :)
Lama chapter 37 . 3/7/2016
Nooooo !
Come on you said just three chapters left, please don't do this to me !
I'll die !
Seriously !
Why so near the end ?!
You sadistic author !
sapplejack chapter 12 . 10/18/2015
Lol Chocobo
Andy is quite dandy chapter 37 . 8/6/2015
Will this story ever be updated again? I hope you do plan on continuing it because this story is truly unique and different from the other SasoDei stories I've seen. You're really great at writing and I wish you wrote more SasoDei xD I hope you update soon ㅅ.ㅅ
Eralynn Uchiha chapter 37 . 3/31/2014
sorry i didnt reveiw sooner i was too busy reading it these past few days. I wouls really like to say how good it was but i cant. I have a very limited vocabulary and there is no word withing my comprehension that even comes close to how awesome it is. So please i need to find out how this ends. I need sasori to save Deidara or an alternative happy ending PLEASE FOR MY SANITY i cannot live if sasori fails. (i wont littereally die just so you know)
Sincerely,
Eralynn Uchiha
anyaparks chapter 19 . 11/26/2013
ZOMG i love this story so much! You just HAVE to continue it!
ofmintandmocha chapter 37 . 9/17/2013
omfk! awesome story xD update soon
xXkiraXo chapter 37 . 8/25/2013
Ahh, damn. Over already. My deepest apologies for waiting until the latest chapter to review...I've made a nasty habit of doing that lately. But, for some sort of recognition, I only do this when I simply can't put a story down. No breaks. Just sleep, eat, inhale. Yup. You've got me absolutely sold on your Fic, it's just so damn captivating; I think I'm in love xD

How you depict the couple is just simply adorable. I almost had a heart stack during some of the fluff scenes- Too cutee! But along with all the juicy SasoDei stuff you have in here, I also like the fact that this Fic has a well planned, solid storyline. It's mesmerizing. Your amazing talent for writing evidently seeps out while reading your work. You really do have a gift.

Just as a sidenote, I adore all of the scenes held in the kitchen... They're usually hilarious. Fighting over how to make soup... xD

Ahh, one last thing, I think. I'd prefer if no lemons took place in the story. I like their relationship where it stands now...Somehow I just think a lemon would somehow soil it or make it less cute or whatever. I'm also just not a fan of lemons anyways.
Guest chapter 37 . 8/25/2013
That was amazinggggggggggggg! You have talent. Please update soon! Oh, and no lemons would be great...I like how the couple is now...their cute and innocent :) Just as a side note...how you built up their relationship was absolutely adorable! I inhaled it all!
CrypticButterfly chapter 37 . 7/29/2013
Oh my goodness. I remember reading this for the first time like, five years ago, and you know what? HOLY CHEESEPUFFS. It's still that amazing emotional roller coaster it was then, and by golly, I never wanted to get off! I was crying, laughing, laughing until I cried (you know the part with the soup gets me every time, I could just reread that for eternity), and just absolutely taken over by this incredible piece of literature.
And I'm not just saying that, I honestly mean it. I spent an entire day entranced by this, I even forgot to eat. Good fanfics are hard to find, and its good to know you haven't given up on this one. This story is almost canon because it has stayed with me all these years. :) Seriously, and I haven't even read or thought of Naruto in over four years (therefor your account might as well be canon, since I have very little idea about what's really going on now. xD) I just wish I was more awake right now to say more about it, so I suppose this is good-bye for now.

Don't leave me hanging too long now, okay?

Your Very Loyal Fan,
Crypticbutterfly
Lunarian chapter 37 . 7/26/2013
*falls over in shock* YOU UPDATED! NOOOO! IT'S TRUE! THE WORLD IS GONNA END! XD Just kidding! Cool chapter, poor Dei though... I remember wondering at the end of the last chapter the last time you updated if Sasori's blade-wing-things would come into play! Can't wait to see more!
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