Reviews for Oh My Veela! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is a well written story; I do hope that you will at some point finish it. thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() You went little Borrowers in this chapter had me laughing |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was certainly one way to find out. Could Ginny be Blaise's mate? or does he just like her? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think it is time for Draco to get over the cheesecake thing. He is acting very un-Draco -Like. |
![]() ![]() ![]() sooo, when are you gonna update? please?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I WANT A CUTE (fuzzy if you will) MOMENT RIGHT NOW! |
![]() ![]() ![]() a bit rushed with Narcissa explaining the veela bit, but other than that I cant wait to read more, not only is it in general just good, it's also really funny, I love the overprotective Draco and him being so sure he's going to get Hermione, good job! |
![]() ![]() No "honey", you're not, never have been, never will be Canadian. You're filipino, and therefore are not Canadian. Your whiddle piece of paper stating "citizenship" does not make you Canadian. Just as much as every other White country you non-Whites flood, can never make ANY of you of European stock. You have no ties, or origins to Canada. You and your race have not created, built, or founded this land. You waited for my race, The WHITE RACE to crate everything from scratch, only to thieve all our inventions and culture. So no, thief, you're not Canadian. |
![]() ![]() LOL, Greek mythology isn't yours. Stop thieving from European/White culture, mythology, and history. You have zero ties to it. |
![]() ![]() what a bloody stupid chapter. Hermione yet again is a cold-hearted nasty b*tch. Congrats Hermione, you judge Dracos' mom after never having met her, and take pleasure in her husband being killed. What a "good" Gryffindor you are. Hermione's the most immature dumb twat in this entire story. |
![]() ![]() holy crap, seriously you need to look up how to write a story. We're supposed to believe that gee, the very day Hermione mentioned her muggle/not muggle neighbour Richard, he just happens to, gee! Transfer to Hogwarts the next day. Wow, that sure is a convenient plot alright! It took him 7 years to transfer, and by some totally realistic and believable twist of events, it all occurred right after Hermione mentioned him, to her Veela mate. What "great" storytelling. |
![]() ![]() why the hell is Hermione in the infirmary this long? She got punched in the nose, big deal. Why is she being treated like a bloody invalid? Last time I checked magic cured a damn punch to the face pretty damn fast. This extended bed rest is beyond ridiculous |
![]() ![]() oh STFU "completely open minded to other preferences". what a load of sh*t. More sjw PC garbage. Nice brainwashing you've got there. |
![]() ![]() Hermione's a flat out b*tch. |
![]() ![]() You got legilimens completely wrong and it's throwing off the entire story. They can't have "conversations" in their minds with each other. That's not even close to how it works. And since when TF can Blaise do it anyway? |