Reviews for Naruto: Rise of the Lord of Foxes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice short story |
![]() ![]() Lol what Naruto is allowed to drink he is of age he's a genin ninja any ninja is allowed to drink if it was a civilian then it's different story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know what this Arashi bullshit is and I hope it stops. Fuck author for just making up names for people that already have names. |
![]() ![]() great work and nice ending |
![]() ![]() i hate it when authors make naruto use -sama... kyubi is still kyubi, naruto respects people in his own way, like calling sarutobi jiji, and what does tsunade have that old bat? naruto has always called her tsunade-ba-chan, like she was his grandmother, fuck, and i have to read this? naruto acting with respect... how disgusting, and making kyubi have a human form if she's not fem-kyubi is annoying you know what? i'm not going to read this, on top of that you call kyubi zangetsu... of course at that time we didn't know his name was kurama, but it's better to leave it as kyubi... |
![]() ![]() The elders shouldn't be able to forcefully marry off an Heiress. Thats fricken dumb. Overriding the clan head who should have authority. He also told them to piss off the first time and she's already engaged so they have no say. Why is that now not a thing and they are pushing for 2? |
![]() ![]() Ignoring that there isn't a civilian council and the advisors should only be advisors and have no actual power. That the Kage should have full power of the NINJA village and not some civilians aside from the Daimyo. Why doesn't she just have the Daimyo remove the problems that are the council and advisors that she herself at the very least with the advisors should be able to remove herself? If he got rid of them then that would let her attempt to fix shit. That should be obvious. |
![]() ![]() The village hidden IN the Shinigami? Wtf. The womb thing was seriously distasteful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why not just kill the council right off the bat? Have Jiraiya and Tsunade do it... After all, there is the MAIN problem... They aren't strong enough to defend themselves from Tsunade AND Jiraiya... (Not even Danzo is).. They're deaths could be public OR private... But there isn't really anything they can do to stop those two... And there would be relatively no consequences... Danzo's root is too mindless to do ANYTHING if danzo isn't there to direct them, koharu and Horinma are next to ABSOLUTELY useless to the village altogether... So... Not like anyone would CARE with all of them dead... And even if people did? Who's going to DO anything about it? It's the two STRONGEST ninja in the village and one is the legit RULER of the village... What can ANYONE do? Main problem with most of these stories, Tsunade and/or Jiraiya could solve ALL the problems in about 30 seconds or less, without even leaving the room with the councils... That is LITERALLY all the time it would take to for either of them to MURDER all of them. So WHY wouldn't they? It would be COMPLETELY within character... In fact NOT doing it, is kinda OOC for them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "only one person had ever defeated him in a life and death battle"? Um no... Itachi, Naruto, Haku, Garaa, Orochimaru.. Have ALL kicked sasuke's ass! (and several others from filler) He's ACTUALLY NEVER WON a fight(unless you count the sound nin in the forest.. But even there, it was kinda orochi's curse mark, not him.. Even his fight to GET to the finals in the chunin exams, was LEE'S taijutsu.. Again NOT him)... He's always getting "saved" or "spared"... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Teme means bastard in japanese so having naruto call kakashi “a teme loving bastard” makes NO SENSE, im sorry not to blow up on this fic in particular but COME ON WHY DOES EVERY FIC HAVE SOME DUMB CRINGE CRAP LIKE THIS, THIS IS WHY I STOPPED READING THESE FOR SO long. whether it be some over bashing crap on characters that aren’t even that bad, like sasuke is not that bad in the anime or manga, im sure you would be pissed if some killed your whole family too. and second the “kami help meoh what a baka” STOP RANDOMLY PUTTING JAPANESE WORDS IN ENGLISH SENTENCES ITS SO DAMN CRINGE, but i don’t know why im even writing all this out with how old this fic is |
![]() ![]() Jus finished reading and man i wish i discovered this long ago. Spectacular! |
![]() ![]() amazing work man finding this 17 years later |
![]() ![]() how did he still have the curse seal that goes away after snake dude is killed? |
![]() ![]() Loved the story, good job here |