Reviews for Naruto: Rise of the Lord of Foxes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story bro! |
![]() ![]() ok she knew about root still being around a couple of chapters ago so how is she surprized they are still around |
![]() ![]() funny anbu are supposed to be smart not brain dead. |
![]() ![]() anything but absolute perfection would be an insult in describing your work here. You are a genius and i'm glad i read your masterpiece. |
![]() ![]() Yachiru is such a spoiled brat. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story, pretty long chaps, not rushed ending, overall pretty damn good. the only things that i disliked are the vast amount of OC and naruto changing his name, it gets irritating trying to remember who kempachi is when you keep expecting naruto |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know that some people overlooked this story because they thought it sucked but I can can say personally that this story needs sequels bro! Anyways I hope that you continue making stories bro. We need more stories like yours on ff. Until Next Time, HG |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Amazingly done this story was excellent in both content plot characters and length thank you for this story you rock |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love ur story it touched my heart |
![]() ![]() I have a short one shot here goes It was a cool crisp morning in Konaha Sakura now had double d breasts and planned to get Naruto's love "Oh Naruto-kun why won't you notice my love." Just then she ran into Naruto who pressed her against a wall and tore off her clothes "I'm gonna FUCK YOU HARD BITCH!" Naruto said. Sakura was scared. But then said, "Yes Naruto-kun fill my petite ass and pussy with cum!" Naruto was surprised "Really Sakura-chan?!" "Oh yes!" Naruto took his 18 inch cock out and shoved it in her tight pussy. "Holy shit Sakura-chan you're so tight!" Sakura pleaded for him to go faster and he did he pounded her. "Oh shit Naruto I'm cumming!" "Me too Sakura!" "NARUTO!" "SAKURA!" A torrent of mixed cum came out then they said they loved each other then passed out. THE END |
![]() ![]() ![]() Forget it, it was bad to begin with, but it just gets worse and worse. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapters name was "Orochimaru's downfall Part 1" yes theres was NO mention of even attacking Orochimaru in this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Agh, some of this is really hard to swallow since we know all of canon nowadays. Btw, not marking this as a Bleach crossover is simply wrong. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whats with the bleach everywhere? And Zaraki? really? dude cant even hear his OWN blade. |