While interesting and divergent from canon; this story doesn't have a lot of compelling reading to this point. Some points are well wrought while others seem flimsy. Through the entire story to this point I get a sense of endless rage and blood-lust. While this isn't entirely wrong it would be near impossible for a person to go from a caring, considerate person to a vengeful homicidal maniac. While in a few points you did show some measures of compassion from the old persona I think that the duress of both would create a psychological rift.

this fic is awesome

go rin

well at least jiraya picked up the hidden message of the shikage

too bad that day with never come danzo

reminds me to the telephone game from when I was a kid where one person says something but my the end of the round/game its become something totally different

I have pity on the poor konoha nurses for having to constantly (it seems) deal with jiraya

I almost pity those 2 knowing what Naruto is likely to do to them is they so much as lay a hand on his girl *snickers*

poor tsunade but yay rin is alive

ik knew yachiru was going to get Naruto lost XD and I really hope rin joins Naruto

well looks as if the tsukikage is smart enough not to thoughtlessly send his ninja to their deaths like danzo did

ok now I know this is a bleach crossover XD not only did u give kurama 'the old man' from bleach's personality and 'name' but u made kenpachi his sword's name

but tsunade isn't going to send any1 after Naruto but that's not going to stop danzo and the council from doing just that

This is a good fanficand there are not many people finishes their fic

OMG when is naruto and hinata gonna meet•]
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