Reviews for Naruto: Rise of the Lord of Foxes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was a decent story from you that i liked, even if i have read better ones from you Snake |
![]() ![]() the next exams are not in the leaf because the leaf hosted the last one it switch's villages every time its held every 4 years there are 5 village's the leafs next time as host is in 20 years. |
![]() ![]() I am curious about the story. Please please have Anko love Naruto to. Both have been hated by Konoha. Both are similar personalities. Both are outcasts. Both are named after food. I love Anko and feel like she was shafted by canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing! Thank you for all of your hard work! |
![]() ![]() Good Stuff |
![]() ![]() The story was awesome bro, the only thing that would have made it better would have been some lemon & limes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Yugao is a "demon hater"? It's her that wear the neko ANBU mask... |
![]() ![]() ![]() cringe shit |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Tsume attacks his daughter and he does nothing? Didnt he specifically say if they attacked again at all, he would attack and now they've done it TWICE more and he's done nothing. This is 99% people threatening each other with no follow up, makes your characters seem 1. extremely unrealiable. 2. bitch made. 151k words and probably 70k of that is threats. Tried to get to the end since it's complete but nah dropped. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooof that entire council meeting is gonna take bleach to scrub that cringefest from my brain. If that scene was taken out of context you would think it was satire with how mind numbingly assinine they are written. You expect a reader to buy into the fact that the ENTIRE WORLD, cultures far and wide, cut off ties with Konoha and knew it was wrong, but somehow tons of prominent people in Konoha have totally different morals randomly? Def wont be able to stomach any more of that steaming dump so here's hoping things improve |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm pretty sure Akamaru is going to like Hana even more as soon as he hears this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was great |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m fine and personally enjoy the demonic and revenge stories. Personally dislike stories where yugao is evil/ignorant |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wouldn't want to be Kiba |
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