Hiya. How are you doing? I think you forgot to write down/type the Land of the Moon, the land of Vegetables, demon country,. Places that Naruto had once visited and helped saved

Also poor Naruto still doesn't know his heritage?

Great!

i dont like the bells, it's stupid for a ninja

but anyway this fanfic is so old that no matter what i comment is not gonna change anything

good read some things pissed me off some thing made me laugh some sad.

he was attacked a third time and still did not kill everyone in the village like he said he would.

she has no power then suddenly she has power then no power then power again make up you damn mind also you wrote last chapter that if they where attacked again they would kill everyone in the village and they where attacked so how come everyone is not dead you just proved their kage to be a liar

they should have started laughing when she gave her and said that she does not run the village so he word is crap.

problem being mandra was not a branch member of the clan hinata is from

they already took out the main base you had them burn it to the ground a chapter or few ago

if the council has all the power why the hell is there still a hokage at all

how is this the fall of orchimaru if he is not even in the damn chapter

really if she was alive obito would not need to do his damn moon eye plan

funny could have her tsume's husband ran away because of her

the curse seal is no where near the power of a biju orchi sure is full of himself.

Ahio la si mette male! Beh vedremo giustizia!