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Ah now i remeber why i stopped reading this. Tho ur story was good in the beginning. I don't like the idea of sharing. I didnt read all of it but i skipped towards the end chapters to see temari invloved and just poor hinata loving naruto so much to the point where she will share him..im not trying to bash on ur story but the idea of a women so desperate to be with the one they love that there willing to do anything as in sharing with another women is a big no no for me. But goodluck on ur story

One thing about this story. Poor Ikkaku xD

Story was a waste of time and the romance was a joke you let your readers compromise you to change your story? Please your a writer write what you want and not let people sway your decision making. Making this harem just kills the emotion and feelings of the story. I will never understand how people can be ok with harems the writing for them is always horrible and it’s no realistic to think that woman like hinata or Temari and many others would be ok to share their man. Single pairings give more depth to the relationship and add more meaning to it as the story goes and continues growing.

Your pairings, that you shoehorned out of nowhere, shows how incompetent you are in directing you story. I hope to god your mother was ravaged the fuck out of. Fuck you cocksucker. If you ever have a family, may they suck a gun before biting a bullet.

Great job please continue

If ur gonna make naruto have other women then why don’t u say “harem” .why put naru/hina. It’s very off putting..

good story, I hope you continue, greetings, see you, bye!

oh my lord this is slowly turning into bleach

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Im no expert on bleach. In fact the only names I know are ichigo, aizen, and rukia. It wasnt until the middle of this chapter I decided to look up kenpachi and yachiru...
Lol. So much fanfiction I pass by because I dont know about it. Like bleach, since I dont care for it not having read or watched it. Much. Random episodes in my childhood dont count since I cant remember them...
Anyways time for vrchat headpatz

Sanosuke.
Is it weird that it sounds like "thanos gay"
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Its all I see when reading that name now lol

So at first this was good but then you through in Temari out of now where and just no. The story say Naruto and Hinata not them 1.

sigh another one of those lame instand power ups

your whole first chapter is wrong, history speaking. im not gonna explain every half assed naruto fan will know what i mean

Great!