Reviews for Unseen by the Untrained Eye
vampyaoifan123 chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
great story
TheGodlessAngelOfDarkness chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
sooooo yummy! I adore this! I just wish you added more chapters! this sex could go on forever! and where did the pervy sage go? So many details left unansewered meow! XD
Madison K chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
O.O Best plan for the future ever.
animeangel2439 chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
ZOMG I LUV NARU/JIRA FANFIC NOW YAY 4 GAY PEOPLE THEY do HAVE THE MOST fun( giggles perversely) YAY HOT SMEXY SMEX U RULZ! (OH! look up bleach and ichigo and kisuke thats always HOT(ichigo kurosaki and kisuke urahara)YAYZ!
Aroara Moon chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
YOu should have made Naruto a girl it would be more Realistice

But i KInda thought it was funny.
Mousychan chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
OMFG THIS WAS SO CUTE! I love JiraNaru *huggles Jirayia* this was so awesomely adorable! :D
WinterWithJack chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
That was awesome!and everyone is at least a little
MysteryLady-Tx chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
interesting, and sad for Naruto that really bites, so only a few people stuck w/him...SO SAD...but man oh man, Jiraiya as a consolation prize...NICE...sorry I LOVE Jiraiya...

Lady Barbossa329 chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
I like this pairing and you did a wonderful job writing this. I wish this would be a pairing in the anime/manga, but sadly it won't happen. At least I can still read this pairing in Fanfiction. :) Keep up the good work.
kitsunekiri chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
i loved it are u going 2 write more?
ketsuekilover chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
wow. thats strange i'm planning on having a sex change when i get older and have the money to do it ad i'm also a perv too! yay -hugs ya- i can't believe it
Broham44 chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
You should totally add another chapter that involues Jiraya or Naruto getting all jealous over one another that would be so cool, o by the way i like chapter one, the endin was cute and funny.
Yasanem chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
zomg i should've been born a guy ._. im perverted like YOUU and Jiraiya-sannin. zomg :) you rule.
Starry-Inkwell chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Kenthos: *nose bleeds* well, any chance of a sequel to this one? Great job, you should write JiraiNaru fics more often.

Minato: *sighs* you are such a pervert

Kenthos: yeah, but I'm your pervert.

Minato: that's true. Anyway, awesome fic.
Iseriad D'angouleme chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
try it with naru as a girl and you might get even more people to read. and by that i mean new title something like (Unseen by the Untrained Eye: revamped for others.) or something. all it'd take is a new title and change all the things like he,him,and his to she,her,and hers.
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