|Reviews for Forbidden Fruit: Persephone's Story|
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/25
I thought it was lovely, cohesive and over all a very sweet short story
| Julie James chapter 5 . 2/17
| Megan the Lunar chapter 5 . 8/17/2015
Omg! This is a great story! I was pretty surprised on how fast they fell in love. When they kissed for the first time I was like, "Whoa. That was fast." But the way you wrote it was also very believable
Well done. Well done, well done I say!
On a random note, the story of Hades and Persephone is almost like the Greek version of Beauty and the Beast in a way
Anyway I loved this story! Great job!
(; Megan the Lunat out!
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/27/2015
I like it, well done.
| jessica chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
it was alright mot very factual
| yokans chapter 5 . 5/17/2013
Wow! Amazingly written-great job! Hades was so kind and caring, I loved it! 3 And now, I know the true story of Persephone. :)
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/30/2013
oh my goodness you uploaded this on my birthday what a great birthday gift:):):)
| wolvesandstars chapter 5 . 3/27/2013
lovely storie! I liked a lot!
| frenzyvammi chapter 5 . 3/25/2013
Isnt messenger god Hermes?
Anyway great storyyy awww hades is so sweeeet
Sso sad that theres no sequel though
this is too shorttttttt gawd TwT
| frenzyvammi chapter 4 . 3/25/2013
I like your story very much
Hades is so sweeeet
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
it was amazing
| lips-like-morphinee chapter 5 . 8/3/2012
| Apollo Vengea chapter 5 . 1/25/2011
Honestly, THE BEST romantic story I've ever read! I agree too, I don't think Hades would have ever kidnapped Persephone. Awesome chemistry between the two, set me dreaming...
| lighght chapter 5 . 12/31/2010
This version of the story was sweet, and I'm glad there was a happy ending. I think Demeter became my favorite character; maybe it's because all of those pet names are similar to the ones I use on my cat. Is that weird?
| Happyfish chapter 5 . 3/28/2010