Reviews for Aeternus Eternus
sidjack chapter 2 . 4/7/2008
T, I just found this. Even with this stupid cold, you have me sitting her and balling like a 4 year old Winchester...I'm just not so adorable. This is superb. You write like an angel, so in tune with these two.

Well done. There just isn't anything else to say. Well, maybe one more...wonderful, marvelous,heartwrenching..

doyoufeellikeyourfallingdown chapter 2 . 3/25/2008
this story was BEAUTIFUL

i loved it to death.

i cried.

i laughed.

i cried again.


the beginning was so sad but beautifully written and very true to the characters.

and the toes. so cute. just the whole thing was beautiful!

great job!
sUnKiSsT chapter 2 . 2/13/2008
Whoa...that was excellent! Great writing! ...oh, and welcome to the SFTCOL(AR)S board! :D
M.Kena chapter 2 . 1/2/2008
Gawd, tears. Many of them.

I haven't read a story on here that has made me cry in so long. Damn, and I thought I was getting over my weepy phase. lol

Aw, now that was about the sweetest damn thing i've ever read. Ever.

Rebel Goddess chapter 2 . 1/2/2008
Poor little Sam, wanting to meet his mum. LOL at Bobby's puppies comment and the "they know they're adorable" line. The bit about Dean knowing her so they couldn't be bad was heartbreaking. I also loved the bit about Dean sleeping without worrying Sam would be taken from him for the first time in twenty years. Excellent story. More please if possible.
supergirl3684 chapter 2 . 12/23/2007
it can NOT be the end! I will start a ff dot net petition until you start writing once again! ;) that was great...just as emotional as the first if not more so...I loved it...the entire last 1/4 (once dean lies next to sam) brought tears to my eyes!
Mockingbyrd chapter 2 . 12/21/2007
wow! you mastered those moments. I really like the part about their hearts beating the same way. Genius! Write more!
ROBINV chapter 2 . 12/20/2007
OMG, so powerful, sad, intense, I can barely stand it! You MUST continue it, of course! Your writing it amazing! Love, Robin
chb76 chapter 2 . 12/20/2007
That was just too cute - funny too.

"What's worse,"..."is that they know they're adorable. The little shits."

LOL that is so true.

Loved the bit about Sam getting stuck in the dryer - I could so see that happening. Hilarious. I take it you wrote this before the Christmas ep seeing as it seems likely that Dean refused to speak about their mom way past his ninth birthday - not that it matters cos your Weechesters are way cuter anyway.

So are you continuing? Think you probably should...
twinchaosblade chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
This was very touching and both chapters had me to tears several times. Well written and fine characterizations, plus too neat snippets on the wee ones. Thanks for sharing.
Lilwazzabug chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
TraSan chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
I WAS going to agree with you. That it wasn't as heart-breaking, but it was as beautiful and wonderful and still bittersweet until it got to these lines:

Murmuring something, Sam curled further into himself…and his big brother, tucking his freezing toes under Dean’s legs. Dean shook his head and smiled softly at what his soul had done. One tainted soul for one heat-seeking-pain-in-the-ass-little brother.

It was a steal.

Eyes have tears in them (I kept them in check this time!).

And these:

When a hand suddenly wrapped around the back of his neck and pulled him in against a beating chest, Dean didn’t pull away.

It was a promise.

A changing of guards.


You're killing me. It is a sweet, slow, agonizing death, but still!

Thank you for writing.
lunasgathering39 chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
Another great chapter. This one not quite as gut-wrenchingly sad, but very sweet. I like to see the softer side of Dean once in a while. And I would so pay money to have a copy of the picture Ellen got (she did get it right?) of the boys leaning on each other in the Impala. I vote for at least one more chapter. We have to know what Bobby thinks of the way you left Dean and Sam at the end of this chapter. You write him as well as you do the boys. _
sendintheclowns chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
You finally posted! And I didn't even badger you. At least not this week. Thanks :)

This chapter was plenty heartbreaking. It was fascinating to see the juxtaposition of the sweet young boys against the traumatized older versions of themselves.

I think there's more story here, don't you? Pretty please?
sendintheclowns chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
I hate to start off with a complaint but you posted this in August, it says TBC - so where's the next chapter? You're killing me here.

Having said that you really hooked me good with what you've shown us. The juxtaposition between kid Sam and Dean and the apparent unhealthy state of the boys is heartbreaking.

Anything I can do to speed this along?
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