Reviews for Unlove
Secretelover chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
konohanin chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Sweet, and very realistic. Nicely written.
Red Riding Freak chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Oh my.

This is such a well, excelently written fic! This is so so sweet. And so emotional. Somehow, you have the amazing skill to be able to put both fluff and emotional without making this too fluffy or angsty.

Ah ah. Sai drinking chocolate syrup. That must be sweet. :') I totally imagine him doing that.

And I like, no, I LOVE this couple, and I've grown quide fond of SasuSai in the last few months, and you should be proud of this work you did.

CarpeNoctem17 chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
I really loved it. I think they would be perfect togeter. Your characterization was spot on, too.

Excellent job, mate.


Crimson-Ranger chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
Excellent Job; Sorry I would say more, but I've had writer's block for two years...-jealous that you can write. ;-;-


I found it amusing that you had Sai drink chocolate syrup...Even though it does sound rather disgusting, I actually somewhat can picture Sai doing that...especially if it was to piss someone off. Har har. That's so funny.

Anyways, Erm. Great job!
ElfArrow chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
that was great!

i don't even support this pairing, but this story was skillfully exectuted.


HopelessOsaka chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
When I decided to reread this fanfic properly, the though I had at the end is that this is the sweetest thing SasuSai could come close to currently- or ever. :3 Simply- but masterfully written, to quote critics. :P

_~ Luffs and kisses! Osaka-neechan
vigaku chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
Waah! I loved it, it was sweet and nice and...a little depressing, but still. Very good!
Hello World 2Day chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
Very good! It was somewhat emotional towards the end, ironic with the title and all, plus Sai's other more cute side is adorable XD Sasuke and Sai make a cute couple! This fic wasn't like a lot of the other fictions I read around here.. Y'know, totally fluffy and happy-go-lucky with petty concerns. Most of this oneshot was facts, some fun, and... well, the ending brought reality and grounding to the story; made it believable. At least, in my eyes :D
Teh Great Nubberz-oneechan chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
Aww. w That's a very cut and simple story you've got going. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Tosa chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
-sniffle- I wrote such a nice review for this, and the website didn't process it! ,_,

I love your take on their relationship. Quirky, cute and, unlike almost all SasuSai (or Sasu anyone, for that matter) not full of WANGST.

Absolutely LOVE this oneshot!
frumpyrox chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
i think i really like ur stories. one of ur fics, I Know, totally inspired me to get moving in my stories. great work.

this story is kind of sad, seeing how they just know and are even expecting one to die. but they know better. they live in the moment and keep each other company for as long as they can. man, i luv ur stories, lol

happy unbirthday