Reviews for Before Your Love
kittykat0301 chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
aw!

that was so cute!

rhianna xx
Cougirl chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
Wow! I loved your fic! It was really cute! If i were u, i would go for the sequel!
Joyful-Sound chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
It's not demanding to ask for reviews - it's telling your readers that you're more inspired to write if you get feedback ;]

The story was very, very nice. Songfics aren't the best things in the world, but the way you placed the lyrics made the flow of the story just work. It was where a normal paragraph break would be.

This was a perfect example of a songfic that is written properly. There were a few spelling things (just some missing letters in a word, something easily looked over). And I also recommened after writing dialogue like "I went to the movies", you specify who says it. There were one or two parts where you added someone elses actions right after another person said something, making who spoke unclear.

Just simple - nothing drastic.

Anyway, this is a favorites story ]

-Picc
Beachbabe010 chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
This story was amazing! U did SUCH a good job in writing it. PLEASE write a sequel!
OhBabbyyTurnMeOn chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
REALY GOOD

I LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON.

OR ILL CYBERSHHOOT YOU

HAHA JK

READ MY FICS PLZ. :)
gracefullyme1025 chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
I like it just the way it is! The story couldn't have been more perfect!
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