|Reviews for Don't Cry Out|
| Yumi Hinasaki chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
I'm glad I've found somene else who likes Hisoka as an uke this was good
| MyChemicalAlice chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
DAMN! SO HAWT!
| Fen-crya chapter 1 . 9/26/2007
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Talk about PWP...This fan fiction has absolutely no purpose. There is so class, no style, just a more ugly version of sex (seemingly 50 times in this fan fiction). You use such vulgar words. DX
I have not looked at your home page, but I bet you are around 11-12 years old with your mentality. Please, be kind to the fan fiction!
I skimmed through VERY quickly, only reading about 5-6 words in each paragraph or so. I hoped to find the actual 'story' part which, to say the least, I found none.
And you have many uneeded commas. .; (I thought I was bad...)
Hun, I'm not trying to be rude. And you will probably hate me for this review. I apologize for that but I felt I needed to say what I felt about this fan fiction. It just kind of made me go , "ick". A love scene is much more appealing and erotic when drawn out and placed in the right setting.
| laustic chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
That was hot! I'm glad that I'm not the only who likes Hisoka as uke and not seme:) I enjoyed reading this alot. Thanks for posting this.