Reviews for The Lingerie Store
Guest chapter 4 . 4/25
Wow! This was such a great story, I'm sorry you didn't continue it. I can see that it was turning into a major production so maybe you didn't feel you would have the time. Still, I enjoyed it very much.
SamKo chapter 4 . 8/3/2013
This story is so wonderful so far and you're a wonderful writer! My heart breaks a little bit seeing that it hasn't been updated in...6 years?! I really don't have much critiquing for you. This is fantastic.

So on the other hand, if you were a first year nursing student 6 years ago, you've (hopefully) finished your undergrad now and could possibly be finishing up your masters, or being a very successful nurse...so it's understandable that you wouldn't be able to finish this! But still wanted to leave this note for you in the hopes that you'll someday check it out!
mtnikolle chapter 4 . 7/16/2013
Wow! I hope you're still planning on completing this story. I love the humor in the beginning and the serious turn that it took in this last chapter.
bigapple chapter 4 . 5/23/2013
Well..tis is a very good storyline..but I hope for updates cos the story shouldnt end like tat...I wan to c how kyoya get together with haruhi...
hanna-chan chapter 4 . 12/11/2012
Love this chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
xxXLoneWolfXxx chapter 4 . 11/4/2012
I would shut the door in his face too! Go haruhi!
Preypacer chapter 4 . 10/25/2011
I found this fic while going through entries on LJ's Kyouyaharuhi comm. Wow... This fic was great! The humor part of the lingerie side was wonderful! And then the shift to attempted assassination! That as just incredible! I loved all of it! Such good work!
Mysteryuz chapter 4 . 10/20/2011
Oh please! Don't end it all now! Unfortunently I can only review your story four times (so far!) so I better make this last one count!

This has been one of the few Ouran fics that have not been completely predictable in terms of the outcome (not just because this isn't a finished story!). Ive said it before but I'm in love with your Kyoya. You seem to understand his character perfectly and know where the draw the line from his facades and his true feelings. Haruhi is as adorable as ever as her independent and infamously unassuming self. I hope to see a bit more of the other characters in Ouran appear in the later chapters and YES I am aware you have not updated in quite sometime. Were talking years. BUT I DO NOT GIVE UP HOPE! You must have had at least some idea as to the future of this story, otherwise you wouldn't have left us with so many strings untied! Even if you're 80 and haven't logged onto fanfic in centuries, I still expect an update :) you're writing again is marvelous, and I hope to hear from you sometime in the future. (But really, don't make me wait till 80!)
Mysteryuz chapter 3 . 10/20/2011
So that is why there was that random narration of the security and the "cleaning" man... Very clever, what a neat writing style you have. It might be clearer to the reader to put a line of astrixs or dashes when you switch POVs. Or possibly that was your intention? To have it all blend together..? I like how you include actual information from the anime/manga to support an idea in your scene, it is very well done and I like how the memory of the bedroom in the beach house gave the reader a look at (again) Kyoyas actual thoughts vs only his actions that Haruhi saw in the anime. It really differs because he's always putting up this facade and we only see it broken when Haruhi recognizes it's broken so our perspective on his character is pretty limited, but you've created in your story a Kyoya I believe.
Mysteryuz chapter 2 . 10/20/2011
At first when reading Kyoyas dreaming scene, I was thinking "This is completely out of character! Kyoya is much more refined than this!" then I realized that even though the anime and manga portray him in this cool collected godly way, he is still after all a teenage boy and it makes sense. I love how you're story goes beyond the anime/manga and really gets into how Kyoya would act of he wasnt around the host club. You have a brilliant way of creating fictional settings and portraying the characters perfectly in their reactions, making for an enjoyable and believable read... and I guess that is what fanfiction is all about!
Mysteryuz chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
To keep the review count going, I'll be posting my official review on the last chapter. Love this story
Tamaki.Lover chapter 4 . 7/13/2011
Great story can you please continue?:) thanks
Raven Nevermore Witch chapter 4 . 7/22/2010
Please update soon, I want to see what happens next.
jazzzz chapter 4 . 12/4/2009
omg this is hot...

i so love this couple a lot XD
Malfoy's Kitten chapter 4 . 8/12/2009
Very entertaining and captivating. I hope to see more soon.
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