Reviews for Deidara's Story
Malak's Wrath Ashe chapter 1 . 2/1/2016
Loved this story a lot. You do a great job of developing characters, and writing in action
Guest chapter 7 . 8/29/2013
loved it!
Guest chapter 4 . 8/28/2013
your right!
Guest chapter 3 . 8/28/2013
awsome! love his story so far
Guest chapter 31 . 5/21/2013
WOW! This story was amazing. It feels like this was actually Deidara's past in the anime.
ThatOneAkatsukiFreak chapter 31 . 9/10/2012
Goddammit I couldn't resist skipping o the end...I going to cry now...
Guest chapter 31 . 7/22/2012
It was good ending. I loved the the part most when he met komi and nearly cried when she died. Your storytelling is good. Unlike me, you can make situations right when it's needed and can make characters like you 'art' is great.
sayan chapter 2 . 7/20/2012
It was good how you used the topic 'shadow clone jutsu'.
sayan chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
It is going well. But are they step-parents or something? Why is he treated like that?
Yimyanger chapter 17 . 4/26/2012
Pft ... U talk too much ... ツ
Rebecca chapter 31 . 12/4/2011
I really enjoyed this story. I always wonder what Deidara's past was, and this pretty much nailed it. Although you misspelled a few things (That's not ment to be mean. Everybody does it. Heh, I misspelled "misspell" xD) this was still really interesting. The only thing I disliked was the fact that at a few parts I couldn't understand what the heck was happening, but then again, I barely ever understand what's happening. :) I rate this 11 out of 5.
Deidre Masumo chapter 26 . 10/7/2011
uh... 11314...
Deidre Masumo chapter 13 . 10/6/2011
um... for the record, Obito had already died before Deidara was even old enough to notice the world around him. And Deidara is actually 19 in the anime, so Ibiki wouldn't have been a little kid, he woulda been in his 20's. otherwise it's really great.
eeveepkmnfan chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Aww..poor Deidara. But I always love these kinds of stories! :)
komi chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
awwww de de is treated sooooooooooooooooooo !
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