|Reviews for Picking up the pieces|
| maple-leaf96 chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
Not bad. i actually like the story.
keep it up yeah?
| Kohaku Kawa chapter 2 . 9/16/2007
hey It's fun to be weird sometimes. This story is pretty improbable but that's what makes it so fun! I like it a lot more than I thought I would at first, and I'm so glad to find someone else who likes Oro/Jiraiya pairings.
Your biggest problem with your writing is that you move between past and present tense alot, bu your english is very good since it's not your first language! I think it is so great that you are writing in english because otherwise I wouldn't be able to read these stories!
| slimmmeiske2 chapter 2 . 8/20/2007
I like this story. I like the plot the most... How come they were older back then? And will they ever come back to Konoha? I'm waiting for next chapter, so please continue!