|Reviews for A Cycle of Kissing and Denial|
| nupinoop296 chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
8D You're a great writer! I loves it!
| MixItUp chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
That was really sweet! I just love Kaiora! The weird writing made it better, after all, thoughts don't move logically, right? It was so sweet, and I just loved it! Thanks for writing it!
| hinoiri chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
AWW! This was so adorable! Nice job on the first POV thing. It went really well!
I also loved the part where they changed physically but not really on the inside. And the whole kissing thing? OMFG! -dies- Took my breath away!
A beautiful piece. Loved it. FAVES!~
| Knit.pump chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
The way you wrote this, as you describe it "weird and haphazard", is perfect for this kinda fic. Kairi's thoughts needed to be broken up and confused otherwise it'd have been too normal and it wouldn't have had the same impact on me.
"He’s quieter now, and he likes to be alone sometimes. His journey has made him stronger and wiser, and I can see that he’s weary, but on the outside he’s still my Sora." My favourite bit; I can completely imagine this part and it feels like if we had seen more of Sora after the game had finished, we would have seen him like this.