Reviews for because every little town has a secret
Jojo657 chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
cool story
yaysarahj chapter 7 . 6/12/2011
love you story but are they all vamps? if not make them because i love bella and emmet being vamps
fresh-BLOOD-was-drawn-2night chapter 28 . 7/5/2010
liked it
doctorlovinsuperlock chapter 21 . 6/4/2010
I love the story and hope the remake is just as good but maybe you could make bella, fish, and dino something not human. You know how they are from long island, well you could make them demigods like Percy Jackson and have Emmett be her half brother. She could have a different dad.
Purplemystery548 chapter 6 . 4/13/2010
are they vampire's is bella one to because I'm confused
ReadingIsSexy15 chapter 30 . 3/23/2010
AH U HAVE TO FINISH THIS STORY OR I WILL KILL U! lol love it so far but one question, does emmett know the cullens r vamps?
thisdarkangel chapter 28 . 2/7/2010
i really really like this story, the characters are your own but still true to the originals. many others seem to have a hard time balancing this. please keep up the good work ;)!
Koffee Krazy chapter 5 . 1/26/2010
wow this story is really just all over the place. The thousands of Point of views in one chapter make it really confusing and annoying. Try to stick with one and at the most two Pov for the chapters or you could just stick with a third person omniscient point of view. You also need to develop the characters a bit a more and edit grammar.

Overall this story is Not all. The plot might have been ok...i can't say for sure, i never got far enough to see any development.

Also some background information might be helpful, ex: Edward is a vampire, a bit about the relationship of bella and emmett, a bit about rosalie etc.

also the thoughts of the characters are really not that coherent at all, again they are just all over the place.

try to re-read your story a couple of times, edit it and then publish it.
AMANDA CULLEN chapter 7 . 1/24/2010
Bella Marie Cullen 213 chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
GoLeft chapter 29 . 10/10/2009
ok first i want to say good story. also i know every cullen accept emmett is a vampire (u mentioned it a lot)but what is bella at the begining of the story *chapter3* u said she had no sent.
Twilightrulz101 chapter 30 . 10/10/2009
This is really good!
Serenity458 chapter 7 . 9/15/2009
hey this is serenity458 and i loved what i have read so and i cant wait to read more your friend serenity458
Life.Is.Beautiful.578 chapter 2 . 7/28/2009
I absolutely love the idea of Emmett as Bella's older brother I think its totally perfect! And Bella's friends from back home sound like really fun people!
Christine Ross chapter 23 . 6/29/2009
Hahahahahahaha! Edwarsd is always talking to himself! And putting himself down!
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