Reviews for Burn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You did a wonderful job there. I'm intrigued. You should really continue writing these! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you manage to get the story told in a relatively small number of words without it ever feeling rushed or choppy. I also like the smut. Two very enthusiastic thumbs up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow beautiful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice job! Sexy! |
![]() ![]() Here's the review I promised in Fever! I wanted specifically to mention how I like the way you led into the "compromising situation" for this story. Very smooth and to me not like another plot device. And I love when I can find a short and sweet read that doesn't feel rushed and still gets something accomplished. Sorry, my reviews tend to ramble on a little randomly. Thanks again for the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another amazing fic - your descriptive writing is fabulous! I'll be going right over to read the others! Mal and Inara are such great characters to write aren't they? I love his reserve and her forthrightness, and you've made them break their emotional barriers wonderfully. My only Firefly fic is at a slight impass at the moment, as I'm struggling with adding a complicated story to what started out as a Mal/Inara angst piece. I think I prefer your approach: keep it simple and beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Tiny* squeak - basic first aid - putting ointment or cream on a burn will make it worse. Hot sex, though . Grace |