Reviews for Fenton Fangs
Guest chapter 2 . 8/14/2017
ChArA pHaNtOm-CiPhEr chapter 3 . 2/10/2017
I just surprised no ones quistoning this
I no longer exist XP chapter 15 . 7/7/2016
Mya chapter 15 . 6/28/2016
Funny punn epic story
Mya chapter 13 . 6/28/2016
Who is Billy's?
randomphandom chapter 15 . 2/21/2016
Hahaha... Awesome story! I really enjoyed reading this :)
trenton chapter 15 . 4/13/2015
funny xD
VampireBond chapter 15 . 10/19/2014
All in all, awesome story! I love Danny as a vampire. And I loved how you made Dracula appear and the fact that he was actually half human. THAT was something I had NOT been expecting! AWESOME TWIST! Tucker's "BLOOD DRIVE!" exclamations were so HILARIOUS! And Danny's reaction to them. LOL The ending was awesome!
Thank you for such an awesome story! :)
LonelyStar and GoldenDragon chapter 2 . 9/25/2014
The speed of freaking light?

The scientific problems with that are staggering.

If Danny were to actually be able to run that fast, he'd have to be pretty well invulnerable to withstand the stresses placed on his body. He'd probably also have problems stopping, as it would take far, far less than a second for him to get where he wanted to be going.

Also, given how quickly light travels (it takes a little over two seconds to get to the moon and back), you'd better put a lot of restrictions on that ability or it could get really overpowered really fast.

It takes an incredible amount of energy to accelerate a body of Danny's size to the velocities near lightspeed, especially if you accelerate fast enough that he would get up to light speed in the unbelievably miniscule amount of time it would take for him to reach that squirrel. Again, he'd need to be invincible to be able to withstand friction and resistance at that speed at that rate of acceleration.

Then there's the fact that it is, as far as we know, impossible for anything but light to reach lightspeed. Because of relativistics, any object getting close to that speed would gain mass until it had gained enough that lightspeed could not be reached.

In conclusion, you didn't need to say that he traveled at the speed of light. 'In a flash', or 'with incredible speed' or something else like that would be good enough. Lightspeed just opens up a big scientific can of worms. It's not too big a thing, nor really hard to fix, but it's little things like these that can rub your readers the wrong way.
FMAlover32 chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
Love it so far!
allietheepic7 chapter 2 . 10/19/2013
"...because when I woke up I ate a squirrel." Danny that's not something you tell your family...
"Then explain this," Why were you carrying it!?
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