Reviews for Cacti
Fullmetal.Alchemist.Fan chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
omg this is the BEST analogy I have ever read
animelover120 chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Whoa! You seem to be writing descriptive oneshots lately. (Though why are they coming out around when school starts? Shouldn't it be the other way around?)

Anyways, *squints* meh...I can't find anything to critique (my personal lack of preferred pairing in FMA aside; I still have some trouble imagining RoyEd *hides*) Love the imagery and the (can't think of the right word...flow? fluidity? rhythm?)

Sorry for the rambling! (I don't think I'm entirely awake yet...)

Hope to see another great story (sometime) soon! .
silkendreammaid chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
the imagery here is so well drawn

silken :)
Apple Snapple chapter 1 . 8/19/2007