|Reviews for McGee's Mission|
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/19
Why are there no more chapters?
| vampire1234 chapter 6 . 10/6/2013
please continue this story
| Sazzita chapter 6 . 1/15/2012
It was a very good story a shame it was never finshed!
| Secret Zia chapter 6 . 2/8/2010
its good...a little jumpy in some parts, but good. i cant wait to see what happens with our mcgee...and Gibbs better not head slap him to hard when he gets back! lol
| smartkid37 chapter 6 . 11/26/2009
update please! more!
| lstladylake chapter 6 . 9/3/2009
Please, you have to continue this story. You can't leave Timmy on his own with those guys after him. I'm waiting with bated breath for what happens next.
| VanFan chapter 6 . 6/26/2009
This story is awesome! I love it keep writing.
| Brooklyn Maxwell chapter 6 . 5/21/2009
please udpate soon
| RacconEyesBlueSkies chapter 6 . 1/20/2009
are you still alive out there? update, please!
| steph0123 chapter 6 . 1/13/2009
i see you haven't updated in a while but please update soon because i just found this story and i really like it. i love mcabby stories. please, please, please!
| mondtaenzerin chapter 6 . 9/28/2008
I love your story and hope you'll update soon!
| TheFallenbecomesHaunted chapter 6 . 7/26/2008
Hey Love this story it's really awesome but are you going to update soon? Wait this story isn't abandon is it? :( It can't I need to find out what happens!
| sk8ergirl-melon chapter 6 . 12/19/2007
This story sounds really good so far! i hope Tim will be OK and that Abby will be Ok
| special agent Ali chapter 6 . 8/21/2007
it is good I cant wait to see what happens when he returns if the truth is told poor Jen and Ziva keeping this secreat must not be fun oh i hope my mcabby is safe
| iheartGibbs chapter 5 . 8/21/2007
I'm leaving this under chapter 5 since I already sent the one from chapter 6.
Something's kind of nagging at me from your story. Didn't you intend to have McGee be undercover? I noticed he gave his real name to the marine being investigated. Wouldn't a marine on the run have done a check and found that McGee had worked at NCIS until just prior to coming there and found it suspicious? Also, if he was traveling under his real name, I know the team would have easily tracked him to Australia. I mean, they ARE investigators.
I don't mean this as a criticism. I am really enjoying the story! I just think it would ring more true if he were working under a false name. It would better support your undercover theory.
That's all. Still loving it. Still anxiously awaiting an update.