Reviews for Belly of the Snake
SilverRose1313 chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
I love the story but I really dislike Karin you did an excellent job on her fangirly-ness.
Arella chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
Oh yes! Make it a 2shot!
heyreese chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
Luv it!
pink-strawberries chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
um...that altering of memory thing with Karin...very would be a good idea...just wished kishimoto would would be cool to make a small sequel or something...i would certainly look forward to it
BuBBLe Tea BaBe chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
yes yes make a two-shot I love love current arc fics with SasuSaku-ness!
Mye-chan chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
I loved your fic! It was really cute!

I loved the idea of Sakura traveling with team Hebi! And I want a two shot too! o/ Or a One shot collection!

Well, i'll be waiting for it!

Necreon chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
I aprove of you making this a two-shot. In fact I'll be waiting for it!

I just really want to know what sasuke and sakura were talking about XP
Akira Matakure chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Yo! Um... I think this is more of a Sui/Ka than a Sasu/Saku... But other than that... it's really good. You are a good writer, but maybe plan in your head how the story's gonna end, and think more about the pairings. Other than that, Exellent story. Holy crap, I sounded like a teacher. o.o
Sakura-san'952 chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
I'll be very simple...yes
KunoichiruleALL chapter 1 . 8/20/2007

I like the story
sasusakualways chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
That was really good! SuiKa is a good pairing too.
SunriseHorizon chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
yes! please make a sasusaku point of view XD

great story
CherryBlossoms38 chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
I think the wo-shot idea wih Sakura's and Sasuke's P.O.V. would be a great idea! Also, I don't think your ending was bad at all. It wrapped things up nicely. Very descriptive. Great job.
Cherry Lollipop and Skittles chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
yes definently go for sasu/saku point of view and i like the oneshot ideas
cherryjubilee chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Cute... maybe a Sasuke POV incorporating the henge incident would work...
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