Reviews for one SENTENCE : DeiIno
U Furimmer chapter 1 . 12/5/2014
Hello!
Can I translate it into Russian?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Ohmygosh. I DID shed a tear right after reading the 40th sentence. T_T
aw chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
so cute. "un" on a note lol
Dbzgirl1011 chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
I CRIED
Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
...wow... :,(
life-in-a-tree-house chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Totally loved this! The last one made me want to cry! And I never do that because of a fanfic, so great job! Really good! But the last one, even though sad, was my favorite one.
Rio82 chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
What a bittersweet story. I love the creative way you wrote it. I'm looking forward to more stories by you.
Yuti-Chan chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
This was so cute, but the last sentence was very sad... Very well done!
talk of michelangelo chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
i'm still getting used to the idea of dei/ino, but i'm getting really fond of them.

#40, revelation saddens me a little more every time i read it, and i've read it over maybe ten times now.

beautifully done. :)
Fallen-Angel-Princess chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
It is a really good story
Waifine chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
5. Conspicuousness

I thought that was very, very cleaver.

7. Affection

And that this was very, very sweet.

11. Misinterpretation

This one was just... amazing in every possible way.

13. Games

XDD That was just hilarious.

14. Symptoms

Basically along the same trail of brilliance as # 11.

22. Unwritten

Joy of all possible joys

38. Attention

...all in convenient locations." Loved it.

These sentences (all these sentences) were fantastic
LeoCookie chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
I first saw this work on your Livejournal ("Revelation" still makes me very sad even reading it for 8 times now. "Truth" and "Heaven" are also tearjerker)My favorites are: "Devotion"(Which i think is the sweetest thing on the list) "Games"(LOL you got to love those portable mouths of his..XD)"Possessiveness"(it made me go "Aww..!")"Jealousy" and "Confession" (Oh man..i would love to see him get all worked up and pouty whenever he hears "Shikamaru" or try to send one of his clay spiders on Shika's house XD)"Misinterpretation" and "Loss" (these reminded me of the song "I miss you" by Incubus..which really fits Deidara's feeling on this one) and lastly,"Nukenin" (The thought of Deidara being there for Ino even if the circumstances are against them is priceless)

Really beautiful work.. ')
XxBlackChaosxX chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
*sobs* That was beautiful. That's all I got. It was beautiful.
PJ Bottomz chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
Hm... Well, I wouldn't say it waqs good, but I wouldn't say it was bad.
chausettes et chauseurs chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Hidan's was definitely great, it made me laugh.

Revelation made me say 'Aw'

great list
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