|Reviews for The Moment It Began|
| Jola123 chapter 119 . 7/20
That was unexpected! Wow!
| Marcy Mavin chapter 1 . 7/19
Came back to this story because I read it years ago and loved it. I didn't know you had published your own independent story. Just fount it on Kindle and will give it a read, it looks like my kind of book!
| Guest chapter 61 . 7/19
This really makes me think about Dumbledore's Army, except with Snape teaching instead of Harry, and maybe him feeling more uneasy.
| BookFan98 chapter 125 . 7/18
One if the best story's I read in a while great job
| lame ass fan chapter 8 . 7/18
second time reading this amazing shit
| Lauren Brown chapter 57 . 7/18
"Sev, wrong's wrong?" - Lily Evans 1979
| Guest chapter 51 . 7/17
I'm loving it so far! I wonder what will happen after the war, even though I think they'll be together, no doubt ;)
| Lauren Brown chapter 39 . 7/17
You wrote "Toabias" next to the end, (I can't resist correcting someone) but, besides that, I'm loving the story! I've been reading for slightly over a day and I'm already on Chapter 39! I wonder what happens in the end...
| Lauren Brown chapter 16 . 7/16
I-I was not expecting that. But now, now I want more.
| Lauren Brown chapter 8 . 7/16
Ok. I am no expert, and I know you probably won't read this, but I just wanted to express my opinion on this. I am actually really liking this so far. I recently got into Harry Potter, mostly the Mauraders' era, and I was looking for a fun fanfiction to read. I've seen a couple, but, by far this is my favourite. I feel like you have captured J.K Rowling's essence and that's amazing! Keep up the good work. :)
Lauren, age 12
P:S: If you wish to, you could always answer me! I'd find it lots of fun to communicate and get advice from a fellow writer.
| DJArla chapter 1 . 7/1
Love your author's note for this chapter. You've delicately touched on some pretty heavy topics with great sensitivity. Looking forward to finishing this off and then reading your other works!
| Guest chapter 109 . 6/24
| CGIhopethere'spudding chapter 121 . 6/5
I loved your story! I loved the characters and what you did with them. I am not a writer and I wish I could elaborate about a chapter on each of my previous sentences but ... ( See? I'm not a writer like I said ! I am " just" a nurse!). Favorite part: Tobias killed Voldemort !OMG! That was PERFECT! It was perfect muggle revenge that just made sense!
Beautiful ending with Sev, Lily, and Evan. Only left wondering a bit about how wizards and muggles are navigating their relationships...
Thanks for the great story! ( Had to write/ review because it's so good: I never write reviews.)('cause I
don't feel I have anything to add).
| Guest chapter 119 . 6/3
Yikes. Tobias huh? That was pretty anticlimactic. Snape and Lily wound up sidelined towards the end.
| Guest chapter 69 . 5/30
Less cancer, more Hogwarts please.
Also hopefully no more of Snape saying that Lily’s parents are like his own a hundred times.