Reviews for The Moment It Began
Fenris Jin chapter 119 . 12/18/2015
It is two Tobias after all! Muhahahaha! XD

Both of them were technically reborn after Severus came back. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 101 . 12/17/2015
Well.. Two people named the same, and the other one was reborn.. If Severus wasn't going to be a father soon.. I'd have voted for Tobias! A Muggle killing Riddle would have been hilarious. XD

Looks like, Voldemort isn't the only one doing the self-fulfilling thing on prophecies.. It's highly likely the little tyke was conceived the night before the prophecy was made.. XD

I think it's still easy to circumvent the same name thing. Just make sure they don't name him Harry Severus Snape. XD

Maybe Severus isn't the reborn one, it could be Harry for all we know.. Still the same issue though. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 100 . 12/17/2015
Tough luck on the prophecy. Severus should really stop doubting himself. XD

Well, in the bright side, at least it's not a baby were going to send to Voldemort. Go Severus! XD
Fenris Jin chapter 80 . 12/17/2015
I really always enjoy this part, when a time-travelling Severus reveals his first life to Lily Evans. I'm actually happy that the older Lily realized that she was essentially heartless for abandoning her best friend over a slight word.

I'm actually looking forward for more saelf sacrificing shenanigans from Severus now that Lily seems to be having issues with his first life and wont be there to berate him when he goes all hero. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 57 . 12/16/2015
I actually cried over Peter's death.. Who'd have thought? That's great writing! XD
Fenris Jin chapter 52 . 12/16/2015
The people Severus has been saving are all quite interesting.. XD

I love your take on this. :D
Fenris Jin chapter 42 . 12/16/2015
Aww.. All the family love. It brings warm and fuzzy feelings.. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 35 . 12/16/2015
Lily is too sensitive, I don't think she's up to helping Severus heal.. Especially if she goes fleeing with every barb the man throws at her.. And there would definitely be barbs.. He's too damaged and jaded not to have them. She'll probably do more damage than any healing with her constant faltering in her resolve whenever Severus is grumpy... XD
Fenris Jin chapter 23 . 12/16/2015
I don't really see how Lily automatically mean the power of love. Severus is really a blind man in love because Canon!Lily certainly never evoked this so called power of love when she ultimately renounced Severus and allowed(condemned really) him to rot with his DE friends.. XD

The Snape family drama is very interesting though. First Eileen and then Tobias.. I'm looking forward to how they make on with their lives now. :)
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 12/16/2015
This sounds like a nice plot.

I'm already a few chapters in, and I must say I'm looking forward to Severus make things work for his mother and Lily being just a part of it. I think his home life and his struggles in helping his mum move me to tears than any romantic notion he has at the moment with Lily. :)
kabs9000 chapter 49 . 12/7/2015
Utterly amazing
kabs9000 chapter 37 . 12/3/2015
Incredible
I love it
kabs9000 chapter 34 . 12/3/2015
Phew, I thought Sirius was dead and severus would be dumped
kabs9000 chapter 27 . 12/3/2015
Oh God why?!
kabs9000 chapter 25 . 12/3/2015
Absolutely completely amazing
I love this
Thank you very much
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