|Reviews for The Moment It Began|
| LunaNotLoony chapter 30 . 2/23
Wow. And James is maturing... I haven't missed the fact that Lily calls him James in her narration, and stands up for the group against Snape. She's going to end up leaving Snape for James, isn't she? I'm a Jily fan, but... no. I'm converted, at least in this story. I just really hope it works out for Snape, because this story is amazing! It's completely caught me, and I care what happens so much... I'm crying, and on the edge of my seat (metaphorically I'm actually lunging in my bed with my computer, but anyway, I can't stop reading!), I, this story is one of the best ever! Keep writing!
| LunaNotLoony chapter 20 . 2/22
First Lily James encounter without Severus there! I don't know whether I want Lily to fall for James or not... This is a really great story, anyway.
| LunaNotLoony chapter 16 . 2/22
They kissed! Finally! I somehow don't think their relationship will work, though, I guess that it will end up all to close to canon with Lily and James together, once James matures, and they'll fall out. That's my guess anyway, but as I have almost 100 more chapter to read, I bid you adios!
I also want to say this story is amazing!
| LunaNotLoony chapter 2 . 2/22
This is really interesting! I'd been thinking about this idea, but I never had the time to write it, so this is brilliant. I can't wait to see how you take it.
| Familyologist chapter 119 . 2/18
that was awesome... I am inspired to make art now... XD
| Familyologist chapter 109 . 2/18
wow... and it keeps on trucking... I haven't been able to do much of useful things around the house because of this story. I wish it was a BOOK that I could take around with me, or an MP3 read aloud, having to sit at the computer to read for hours is telltale... lol
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/15
This is beautifully written!
| Billion chapter 2 . 2/15
This is a good fan fiction couldn't stop reading it.
| Familyologist chapter 66 . 2/17
wouldn't it have been grand if a bottle of Felix Felicis was brewed for Lily's mother..?
| Familyologist chapter 56 . 2/17
There ought to be a final chapter as an index, with all the favorite little parts such as this listed with the chapters. I'm sure I'm not the only one who would re-read parts like this like one revisits a favorite painting in a museum.
| Familyologist chapter 25 . 2/16
Why on earth was Molly Weasley and her children mentioned here? Even with his past life in consideration, Severus did not have much to do with their lot... He chiefly knew of the Weasleys from the Order...
| Vampires2rocks chapter 100 . 2/9
The prophecy meant Severus this time.
| atymer chapter 121 . 2/8
A wonderful character study of Severus as he attempts to 'do the right thing' and still obtain his heart's desire. I appreciate the author staying true to Snape's personality. It was a much more realistic presentation than you usually get in fanfic. Some writers turn him so completely around he is hard to recognize. This story gives us the canon character doing battle with himself.
I loved it.
| Vampires2rocks chapter 55 . 2/8
wait, a minute. I just remembered a few chapters back reading something along the lines of snape thinking 'Protect harry...'
Harry's gonna be here?!
| Vampires2rocks chapter 51 . 2/8
...'development of other characters'?
Didn't seem as if Sirius developed much. Not even a brain cell for that to matter.