Reviews for Lollipop
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
This is totally underrated! :D I like how the "licking the lollipop"-scene suddenly gained two meaning ;DD And L reviewing the tapes, I can SO see him doing his ;3
littleann84 chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
So that is pretty much one of the BEST LightxL oneshots I've ever read! XD

OMG so smexy!

And very, very well written! You're very good at balancing sexuality and romance.

Great job!

I'm gonna go have a lollipop now...
bunnyboolikesoreos chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
I think I liked the storyline more than the smut. I'm being serious, I like the way you write, it seems. xD The smut was good too. Or maybe it's candy I like more than the smut. Hm...
Dlvvanzor chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
...Aw! And hot! But aw! 3
woo chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
very nice
Greendayluvr93 chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
...scaary thing is...I was eating a strawberry paddle pop as I read this.

Anyway, nice writing! Also, this one-shot has put in the mood for hot tea.

Lol I just realized that its like one A.M where I live.

**sigh** so much for that tea.
Ladyblue17 chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
hahaha great one-shot _
p1fl chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
L is such a candy prostitute X3
Starling Short chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
Snupin chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
I love this so much! ]
Kunoichi21 chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
Great write. I love the use of candy. You should continue this story, if only for the purpose of letting people know what would happen if those two watched exactly what they shared on that one special night. I would love to read a chapter like that. Loved your story! And I can't wait to see more.
Vixyfox chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
Haha! That was so cute! I loved it! -
Nokturnal Augury chapter 1 . 9/25/2007


-insert very long excited fangirl rant here-

That was extremely cute.
destiny chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
SoulTaken chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
Hahaha, yes! It was a long one-shot! I totally loved it!

Write more one-shots like this!
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