Reviews for In the Dark
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
Its brilliant! Thanks for writing it!
sasunarulover16 chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
Please continue this it's so adorable
Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Cute!
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Very sweet... Although the idea of Naru grinning widely... *shudders* Anyways, I didn't even realize the Twilight reference even though I've read all the books... I just thoght it was very familiar... XD I only realized where it came from when I read the reviews. XD
SpiritedChild chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
That was rly good. :D
LvndrRsThrn chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
XD Who would have thought Mai read Twilight? Good story. Loved it.
Felling chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
I had to keep just re-reading this over and over.

I'd love to see another chapter where he wakes up and all hell breaks loose. :P

Amazing story and your writing really got to me, Only cause the way someone writes is how good their story comes out. 'Nother Chappie? :D

-T.M
mikki-x chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
great story!
firecloak chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
When I read Twilight, I imagine Mai as Bella and Naru as Edward. I'm kinda surprised someone else sees the similarity! xD

Anyway, amazing story! Romantic but not too mushy. Just the way I like it. I hope you continue Lessons too, btw
The Sora-muffin chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Yay! This is one of the best NaruxMai one shots I've read! Wonderful job.
Kai chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
That was nice, not too sappy and perfect for Mai, I'm sure Naru would have reacted that way too.

Thankyou
Hesunohana chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
just Mai-like !
scarletskies-x chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
So cute! XD I absolutely loved it.

Kitsune-chan *_*
Raina Darlig chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
CUTE!1
wind-master-redmoon chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
aww how sweet
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