|Reviews for Once More with Feeling|
| Mono2702 chapter 17 . 6/23/2016
| darklegendarysoldier chapter 14 . 5/27/2016
Yes all of the yes you need to come back to this and finish this I would love to see the ending of this fix you made I hope you come back to this soon.
| Ibskib chapter 16 . 5/10/2016
For some reason there are a fair amount of words mashed together, was the space lost through some formatting error, or just sloppy writing?
| Duncan0Idaho chapter 13 . 4/4/2016
"The thing you have to understand…no…that I think you do understand, Shinji" Kaji said emphatically, "is that we're only, at best, half civilized. This…thin veneer of civilization we share is the only imaginary line that keeps us from acting out our own darkest impulses. It allows our 'humanity' to resist justifying butchery."
My my, Kaiji has hidden depths, he is almost quoting Leviathan's loke.
| romansch678 chapter 17 . 4/1/2016
So, I'd like to start this review off on a positive note by saying that I absolutely enjoyed this fic. I'm not one to read Evangelion fics (they tend to either be massive, angst ridden fetish fuel or filled eith enough character bashing to make Chuuni Exam Day look tame), but this one caught my interest, so I decided to give it a shot... And I'm glad I did.
The characterization here is not only spot in to canon, but actually improves upon it in many ways: Shinji is still Shinji, but he's also different, having learned and grown from the absolute HELL he was put through in the main timeline; Rei is very much that awkward, emotionally stunted girl who has just a hint of "inhuman" to her, but you've fleshed her out in such a way that shows she is not only still utterly human, but possibly more human than anyone else in the series; Asuka is her normal "Tsundere" self, but the torment that she went through that turned her into the fiery redhead we know shows, even when it isn't in HER POV. The way you've written these characters, even the minor ones, shows a very fine attention to detail that many writers lack, and for that you get a thumbs up in my book.
However, one of the things that... turned me off, so to speak, was your punctuation. Or, rather, the lack thereof. I know you said you didn't have a Beta for most of this and that gave you some conversion issues, but the sheer NUMBER of punctuation mistakes I just unacceptable. It is very, very jarring to be reading a sentence and then suddenly move into another, unrelated thought without any warning, and, while the strength if your characterization and interaction made up for enough to keep me engaged, it was still an issue. A big, distracting issue.
Thy being said, this is still a solidly written, if not exactly well edited, story, even unit isn't finished, and I very much enjoyed reading it. Overall, I'd give you a 7.5/10, with our characterization and character interaction making up the bulk of that- if you were to go through this and fix up the punctuation, you'd have gotten more, likely a 9 or so, but that is immaterial.
Thank you for the enjoyable read.
| 2Rule179 chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
It's dead. May it rest in peace.
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/13/2016
| Undeadmonkey8 chapter 17 . 3/10/2016
Well, it's been a while since you've updated, but I hope that you didn't abandon the story. It's a GREAT piece of work, really. The way you have the characters playing off of one another, and the fact that you have them so well in character - honestly even Shinji, considering that he's been through Hell already, that usually gives you a bit of a spine.
Again, the story is great, and I hope you aren't throwing it out.
Keep Writing, Keep Rocking!
| NecrorexSparda Juubi-No-Kishin chapter 1 . 3/9/2016
No offense but this sounds like one of those crappy preludes to movies (spoken as morgan freeman) the following movie is rated R please ask your parents for the iages your about to see
| logwet chapter 17 . 2/29/2016
Spectacular story! This is probably the best written fanfic I've seen on this website! :D
Words can not describe how eloquent your writing is, and I only hope that you will continue this wonderful fic!
| Guest chapter 17 . 2/16/2016
Where the fuck os the update
| Radau chapter 17 . 2/11/2016
Enjoyed the story to a great degree. Thank you for that, Crazy-88!
The day you will continue this will be a grand one indeed.
| Barricade chapter 17 . 1/14/2016
Oh how I -wish- you'd finish this.
| rc48177 chapter 3 . 1/9/2016
I was hesitant at first but yep, definitely favoriting this.
| Scarlet88 chapter 17 . 12/27/2015
I really love this story! Great detail and characterization! Any chance that you'll continue this story someday?