MENTORS MY ASS. I imagine you'll kill his owl, break his arms, and scar him up more next. I'm ashamed I read this far.[

NOOOO I wanted to keep reading ahhhhh!
also great story I LOVE it! hope the next chapter comes out soon!

What an absolutely fabulous sentence:

"And then, an incredible thing happened. He saw Professor Snape smile"

Thank you for your story!

love it! i have read lots of snape mentors harry and they akways klick right away, but this is more realistic (dare I use that in a review about magic?!) it is a very well written story.

This was a good story.

Huge harry hugs

Thank you for such an incredible story! I very much enjoyed every moment

I'd really like to continue with this, but I just can't get around how cruel Severus is to Harry. Especially considering he knows about the abuse he has endured. To keep referring to Harry as "brat" is unacceptable, as well as inventing reasons to punish him. This is where I stop reading.

I hate to be a nag but can you please title your chapters it's a pain to find a specific chapter unless I remember what happened in the chapter and I remember the chapter number please it would make it easier to read and help people get into reading your story because it's really good

Are you doing the rest of the books too? Please do!

Poor, poor Sevvy, the more he punishes Harry, the more he has to see him. Vae misero mihi!

All I can say is...AWESOME! Looking forward to where you take this.

As part of my annual "read my favorite fanfics," I came to visit. I still love your story. Thank you.

all of these "a boy who (insert words hereare getting old

I think you really over played the angsty kid angle for this chapter. At this point in time Harry is more hopeful that he will never see the dursleys again not some broken teenager or grown man who knows everything there is to know with their minuscule word view.