Reviews for The Girl That Fell Out Of The Sky
YingYangYeah13 chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
Does anybody know how to convert stories so that I can add more chapters to this story...? I'm sorry if I'm asking this but I don't know how to convert stories so if I don't know how to convert stories...I can't add more chapters into my stories...can anybody help me out...?
EWEWEWEWEW chapter 6 . 11/21/2007
Teh awesomeness! Continue the awesomeness!

Why is Saya like that? NO! DON'T DIE SAYA!

And when is Haji coming? Solomon? Carl?
Yume-Yume chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
Mao... (that girl who spend almost half a million dollars just to find Kai.

Kai... Is just Kai!

Kai kinda dislikes Mao.

the story is still good so far.
EWEWEWEWEW chapter 5 . 10/13/2007
OMFG! No Haji?

WAH. *cries*

Oh well,I still like this! XD
Omoidase chapter 2 . 9/12/2007
Kai doesn't curse that much. He doesn't even curse a lot. They don't shout so much with all the capital letters either.

The story could also use more fleshing out and details. A story shouldn't rely on dialogue alone. Write more details.

It has potential, so keep on going.
EWEWEWEWEW chapter 3 . 8/25/2007
So this is Kai/Saya,I never liked this pairing but this is a great story! _
EWEWEWEWEW chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
LMAO! thats funny.