|Reviews for Love Bites|
| Lara1221 chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Wow, that was really good. In character and funny and romantic and everything. Good job :)
| meltedhappiness chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Aahhh, Sirius is such a sadist, laughing at Jamesypoo's pain, really cute. I love Lily's freaking out and Marlene's reactions. I wonder when Lily's going to find out about their Animagi...*hint hint*
| DELETED ACCOUNT 10123 chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
So sweet. Aww!
| thehyperone chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Oh yeah. XD Go Lily! I was kinda hoping she'd be more pissed than that... but I also didn't want her to be, cuz they're so cute!
| Graffigraphy chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
The idea of James having a "hickey" from Sirius is pretty funny. It was a cute read.
Two things, though:
1. You can convey yelling without writing in all caps. Italics work well, I think.
And 2. Sirius is portrayed as childish at parts. It's something to try to avoid in the future.
| Winterlude chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
Aw... cute. Even though if I had been Lily I would have found difficult to believe that SIRIUS had bitten James. I mean, can you picture him doing that?
| Prongs76 chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
Aw how sweet :)
| BiteMeSilly1606 chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
so sweet and funny. i couldnt stop laughing at ALL! sirius's love bite.. ahaha
| Bardess of Avon chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
"And she's probably named something sexy like Brianna or Ali or something like that!"
*rolls on the floor, laughing*
You, madam, have a very special place in my heart.
| Trinity Day chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Of course Sirius was laughing hysterically at the matter? What sensible person wouldn't be...from a safe distance away, of course. Kind of like the safe distance I am away from the Marauders, laughing at them for having a time-out corner. But not a safe distance away from you, the author, because I don't think you'll mind knowing that I found this story to be funny.
| An Aspiring Author chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
so sweet and funny and totally random! i loved it! especially the parts about the time out corner and lily freaking out! great job!
| Heiress of Lohaust chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
That was cute. Really dramatic, I loved when Sirius gets in trouble. But it was a little childish, but it was intended that way, I'm sure.
| Caterina Sforza chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
cute and so hilarious!
| Cassandrawrrr chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Aw. That was so cute! I loved the ending! .
Stupid Sirius. :P
| Fortheheckofit chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
That was so funny! I loved the time-out corner and the cynic's point-of-view of their "dancing display." The end was cute, too.
You've got a few gramar errors (like "James' hand" should be "James's hand.") that need fixing, but besides that, I love this story.