Reviews for Love Bites
icecatfire chapter 1 . 7/24/2016
... how did lily not notice it was a DOG bite? xD if THAT'S the case what sort of hicky's have THEY been giving eachother?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/3/2015
I just love that they have a time out corner
Lara1221 chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Wow, that was really good. In character and funny and romantic and everything. Good job :)
meltedhappiness chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Aahhh, Sirius is such a sadist, laughing at Jamesypoo's pain, really cute. I love Lily's freaking out and Marlene's reactions. I wonder when Lily's going to find out about their Animagi...*hint hint*
DELETED ACCOUNT 10123 chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
So sweet. Aww!

thehyperone chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Oh yeah. XD Go Lily! I was kinda hoping she'd be more pissed than that... but I also didn't want her to be, cuz they're so cute!

- Chris
Graffigraphy chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
The idea of James having a "hickey" from Sirius is pretty funny. It was a cute read.

Two things, though:

1. You can convey yelling without writing in all caps. Italics work well, I think.

And 2. Sirius is portrayed as childish at parts. It's something to try to avoid in the future.

Keep writing!
Winterlude chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
Aw... cute. Even though if I had been Lily I would have found difficult to believe that SIRIUS had bitten James. I mean, can you picture him doing that?
Prongs76 chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
Aw how sweet :)
BiteMeSilly1606 chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
so sweet and funny. i couldnt stop laughing at ALL! sirius's love bite.. ahaha
Bardess of Avon chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
"And she's probably named something sexy like Brianna or Ali or something like that!"

*rolls on the floor, laughing*

You, madam, have a very special place in my heart.
Trinity Day chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Of course Sirius was laughing hysterically at the matter? What sensible person wouldn't be...from a safe distance away, of course. Kind of like the safe distance I am away from the Marauders, laughing at them for having a time-out corner. But not a safe distance away from you, the author, because I don't think you'll mind knowing that I found this story to be funny.
An Aspiring Author chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
so sweet and funny and totally random! i loved it! especially the parts about the time out corner and lily freaking out! great job!
Heiress of Lohaust chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
That was cute. Really dramatic, I loved when Sirius gets in trouble. But it was a little childish, but it was intended that way, I'm sure.

Caterina Sforza chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
cute and so hilarious!
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