Reviews for With No Egress
DewWater chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
That's depressing. I liked the ending, about "crying for every pulse" :(
Extraintrovert chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
Constructive, eh? (I didn't know I was Canadian)

First off, it's very short. That is rarely immediately a bad thing, but I feel that the theme could have been extended into different areas or actions. Related to that, Sakura's thoughts somehow don't seem appropriately involving for the situation.

However, juxtaposition between thoughts and actions is effective and brilliant, and I just can't resist a one-chot containing passion.
Flying Fox of Snowy Mountain chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
Well, this is not that good.
Nachtweiss chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
This is very, very good. It goes beyond the norm that you usually get with these three characters. Love it.

(I'm horrible at constructive criticism. I'm sorry.)