Reviews for Preserving Brilliance
yayme2012 chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
I like the idea so far...
Ember Nickel chapter 4 . 9/21/2007
You have some good ideas here. I thought you used far too many ...s, however. Just a nitpicky thing.
Ember Nickel chapter 3 . 8/24/2007
Errgh. That's a disturbing finish. But it was emotionally impacting, so well done.
Ember Nickel chapter 2 . 8/23/2007
Nice. (By the way, it's usually "Prologue" or "Prolog": just a heads up.)
Ember Nickel chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
I'd like to read this one.