|Reviews for Naiveness|
| Ash yuki chapter 2 . 9/22/2017
| Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 2 . 5/29/2014
who cares! go girls!
| EliTwiVamp chapter 2 . 9/8/2013
This was great! And I hope your exam didn't turn out too bad. Loved this!
| EliTwiVamp chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
I thought it was good, and cute. Just wanted to say it's naiveté though. Sorry. Grammar freak here. But this was really awesome/adorable!
| mahoushoujocore chapter 2 . 12/4/2012
I loved this. It's sweet. Both sweet as on cute and sweet as in totally awesome!
| Gnarled Bone chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
I got this stupid grin on my face and I can't wipe it off D
anyways, amazing fic, I loved it.
| Raistlin7 chapter 2 . 11/30/2011
I first chalked the thrid hand up to "Oh, the writer got confused... oh well." and then my eyes went big, when it was Stars hand!
Yes, I can very well imagine Raven brooding over the kiss the whole day and not noticing that Star might have entered her room again.
Especially love the last sentence *gggg*
| tears of the soul chapter 2 . 12/31/2009
Oh my, Star is full of randomness. And Raven, its fine to be naive
| Dr. F. M. Obsesser chapter 2 . 11/20/2008
I have exams as well tomorrow, but really, after reading this, I don't think I'll be doing any more studying. :) Very sweet and highly amusing: nice job.
| RavenRoth1000 chapter 2 . 11/13/2008
._. update now. x3
| RainWander chapter 2 . 11/12/2008
aww ended when it was getting good! RIGHT MORE PLZ!
| RainWander chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
| countwes chapter 2 . 11/3/2008
lol "engined" LAWL
| Katie Jane chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
It may have been nonsense to you but I liked it! If this is nonsense, then more of it please!
| xxxRed Ravenxxx chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
well it was short granted but funnyand still a good fic if i didnt like it youd know heh