Reviews for Losing Lorelai
Rori Potter chapter 2 . 8/21/2011
Brilliant story.
JavaForever chapter 2 . 1/2/2008
Okay, see this is just not as good as PM's, because I don't focus well when tired. Therefore, my reviews are probably lacking...

I thought that you handled the return of Max extremely well. I never particularly liked him, but I never hated him. I was glad to see that Lorelai was gentle, but firm in letting him down. Good for her; and good for Luke for not being jealous of Max. I love how you show the way these characters have grown over the years. Their evolution to being even better people is obvious in this fic. I don't care what you said before, it is every bit as good as Losing Luke! Have you ever wondered what would happen if Max and Rachel ended up together? Funny, funny...

Pssh! You? MY stalker? Oh please. If anything, I'm the one stalking you! I'm your groupie; surprised it took you so long to notice...
JavaForever chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
Good start! Great job exploring Max's thoughts and I'm gonna read more! For sure! *giggles* Hey that rhymed! I'm excited to read Luke's reaction...

Also, apparently, fanfic has a limit on PM's, one that I just discovered. Unless you have another solution, I think we're done chatting for the night. *sob sob*
Cinny72 chapter 2 . 9/5/2007
Aww, I'm so glad you update this, and I just loved it. Little Will and Emma Danes! How cute. The idea of little LL kids running around always gives me a happy feeling. I actually felt bad for Max, as smarmy as I always thought he was... but I'm glad he finally realizes that he and Lorelai weren't right for each other. I liked that Lorelai assured him he would one day find his perfect match somewhere else, and that Luke was really nice about it (I loved the line about Max expecting a few punches thrown in his face. LOL!).

Awesome job! :)
BluEeYedBRunETte726 chapter 2 . 9/5/2007
that was a great ending...i loved it...just like everything else you write

formerly known as: gilmorefreak101 ...btw, does this penname look familiar to you, cuz part of the reason i changed it was because there were like twelve gilmorefreaks out there...just wondering not a big deal...can't wait until your next update!
The Mrs.Ventimiglia chapter 2 . 9/5/2007
Aww, they have kids! That's so cute. I loved the way you had them talk. It wasn't too 'haha, I'm married to a great guy. Too bad your still single.' But I loved it. I can't wait for more from you!
Schuyler Lola chapter 2 . 9/5/2007
Java! Yay! I liked this, and Luke and Lorelai's kids names. Cute. Poor max. But, whatever.
midwoodbklyn chapter 2 . 9/5/2007
Emma and wil, I love that. great chapter :)
gilmorefanforever chapter 2 . 9/5/2007
Nice job, Java.
J.Stone chapter 2 . 9/5/2007
OH NO! Run for your lives! It's Max, the scary nipple guy! Just one question about this story. Is Lorelai having regrets?

Great job, as always. Thank you.

John Stone
Jeremy Shane chapter 2 . 9/5/2007
good chapter
Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
good chapter
CrimStudent47 chapter 2 . 9/5/2007
love the story!
J.Stone chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
Nope. Never was a Max fan. However it is well written. I wish you well with this story.

John Stone.
chants chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
Update soon!
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