|Reviews for Lisa is Pregnant|
| sideshow al chapter 3 . 10/9/2007
U R THE WORST AUTHO F#%*%N MARTIAN
| sideshow al chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
GREAT STORY BUT ALOT OF SPELLING MISTAKES
| sodapop765 chapter 2 . 9/24/2007
His sister? You mean her.
| 101-ways2kill-kenny chapter 3 . 9/22/2007
i'm sorry but this sucked balls
| midnighttigar chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
it was ok
| bdlywrttn chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
This has to be a joke. I'm sorry, because either it is a joke, or english is not your first language...or second language.
I'm not gonna even go into the things that were wrong, I'm sorry, but I don't know why I read this. If you don't want to delete it, then PLEASE fix it.
| Dead Composer chapter 2 . 9/13/2007
Please delete this garbage. (Cyberman voice) DELETE DELETE DELETE
| Vaporeon-Chan chapter 3 . 9/12/2007
Hi. Um Are you dyslexic?
Or maybe from a different country?
This story really really sucks and umm incest is scary.
Not only is incest scary but its fucking disgusting.
Please learn how to spell.
And delete this story. Its spelled umm Dead
Also its Maggie's Talk
Not Maggie Is Talk.
Oh yea and umm Lets see what other errors I will find.
Marge Worries should be Marge is Worried.
She reminds of you and bart should be.
She reminds me of you and barty. "What is it Dad?" Lisa question should be.
"What is it Dad?" Lisa asked.
What was she and bart doing?
Should be what were her and bart doing.
Later that the simpsons came hom.
Should be Later that night the Simpsons came home.
situaytine should be Situation
The sex part was just disgusting also umm yea no. Just scary and not well written or discriptive.
It was a quickie.
Also there was to be a reason as to why they are in the moutains.
So lisa kept clothes on was easy should be.
So Lisa kept her clothes it was easy. Just panty should be He didn't have pants but she had panties on.
Its spelled Came
Cam is like a video camera.
wood is like fire wood.
That's wrong way to use that word.
It should be would. That's the right word.
Its spelled Daughter.
goffing should be spelt goofing and agin should be spelt again.
"What happen." Lisa say.
Should be "What happened?" Lisa asked
When Homer says you awake.
He should have said Your Awake?
"I tell you not to play in moutain" should be. "I told you not to play on that moutain."
"Another thing Lisa." Hibert say. "Congradulation."
Should be. "Another thing Lisa." Hibert said. "Congratulations."
I'm the grammer and spelling queen apparently.
You sound Russian.
By the way you seem to say words.
Well if your from any different country and you have broken english. I'll help you.
This story did suck though. I'm being brutally honest.
| Dead Composer chapter 3 . 9/11/2007
I can't believe you're continuing this story. Please, please delete it and don't write any more until you've taken some lessons in basic English.
| Steven 'Janus' Apollo chapter 3 . 9/11/2007
This is terribly written. Even if your grammar wasn't terrible, your plotting is completely implausible (incest is the last thing a brother and sister freezing on the mountains would be thinking of) and juvenile. I am going to assume that A) English isn't your first language, B) You're young, or C) You're a troll. At any rate, you shouldn't be writing fanfiction, ecspecially if it degenerates into this tripe. Heck, I'm male, and I have no idea where my "dominant worm" is. And "live ghost on"? I can only assume you meant "life goes on."
Awful, just awful. Really.
| Lord Cellytron chapter 3 . 9/11/2007
Haha, okay. I will kind of give you credit for addressing the age... thing.
Dude, either you are a troll, in which case you're very talented at writing badfic well, or you're serious, in which case... sorry. But at least you have loyal readers; more than most goodfic writers probably have!
| The Unknown Name chapter 2 . 8/30/2007
Spelling needs to improve by miles and woulnd't the baby be deformed as they are brother and sister. Also Lisa is her sister not his sister (Maggie)
| SirDeathShriek chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
...No amount of therapy will EVER make me sane again after readin that..
| Hellfire04 chapter 2 . 8/27/2007
For the love of God PLEASE use a spellcheck. Also as I female I would like to know where my 'recessive parts' are, I'd also love to know what a 'domonant worm' supposed to be? Furthermore, the whole 'have sex or die' thing... it's a terrible plot device. Not to mention that they are 8 YEARS OLD and probably don't know anything about sex yet.
In short... this story sucks.
| Lord Cellytron chapter 2 . 8/25/2007
Wait, why can Maggie talk?
Anyway, I have no doubt that this fic will go down in history, and will one day take its exalted place among the likes of "Legolas", "Celebrian", "Agony in Pink" and the Chinese subtitled Star Wars.
Congratulations, you're going to be immortal.