Reviews for Elysium
yindragonkiba chapter 24 . 6/19/2014
Wow awesome I like it
Silent Bunshin chapter 24 . 12/1/2013
I like this story and the different route you have taken it to as well. I look forward to your updates if you are still working on this story.
Silent Bunshin chapter 7 . 11/30/2013
Liking the story so far. I like the twist you put on the story line. My only complaint is the consistent and incorrect use of "defiantly" in your story and many others I have read. The word you are thinking of is "definitely". I know it doesn't look too different, but it drives me absolutely insane how many people misuse and confuse these two words. Look them up or just look at their root words and you will see the errors for what they are.
Kleily chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
good
shadowmaster0304 chapter 24 . 9/29/2013
This is great. You should update soon.
fireforge92 chapter 24 . 9/1/2013
Update soon... Please?
S. S. Shadow chapter 24 . 8/8/2013
love the story, little twist here and there keep it from full on cannon rehashing and bits of foreshadowing maintain the intrigue for future chapters, well done. :)
VanFanle chapter 2 . 7/1/2013
Nice chapter. But you mixed up nee and nii. Nee is sister nii is brother. It should be Itchii-nii and Renai-nee.
Guest chapter 24 . 6/25/2013
harems suck
Guest chapter 24 . 6/24/2013
harems suck penis
Guest chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
I'm sorry, KAZAMA!
Dudtheman chapter 23 . 6/25/2013
love the story its crazy GOOD thanks for the awesome read!
alec-potter chapter 24 . 6/25/2013
Nice chapter. Good to see you still writing. And hoping that you get a beta soon.
Fritter chapter 24 . 6/25/2013
Ok, fun story, just read the whole thing... couple notes:

1. Border of a country, not boarder.
2. Breaking up, not braking up.
Stuff like that.

Trust in MS word grammar check, it's your friend.
Dudtheman chapter 24 . 6/24/2013
nice chapter thanks for the read
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