Reviews for Elysium
Hmason chapter 24 . 11/5/2017
really promising story shame it hasn't been updated in 4 years hope you return to it
Guest chapter 22 . 7/17/2017
Haha loool when he sang the lyrics to remember the name I was howling lol
my 2 guys chapter 5 . 6/29/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 4 . 6/27/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 3 . 6/26/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 6/23/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
YumiKnowsBest chapter 24 . 7/27/2015
even though you say the beta has returned, most of us are waiting for the next chapter, but since its been 2 years I hope your alright, please hurry up and post the next chapter.
yindragonkiba chapter 24 . 6/19/2014
Wow awesome I like it
Silent Bunshin chapter 24 . 12/1/2013
I like this story and the different route you have taken it to as well. I look forward to your updates if you are still working on this story.
Silent Bunshin chapter 7 . 11/30/2013
Liking the story so far. I like the twist you put on the story line. My only complaint is the consistent and incorrect use of "defiantly" in your story and many others I have read. The word you are thinking of is "definitely". I know it doesn't look too different, but it drives me absolutely insane how many people misuse and confuse these two words. Look them up or just look at their root words and you will see the errors for what they are.
Kleily chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
shadowmaster0304 chapter 24 . 9/29/2013
This is great. You should update soon.
fireforge92 chapter 24 . 9/1/2013
Update soon... Please?
S. S. Shadow chapter 24 . 8/8/2013
love the story, little twist here and there keep it from full on cannon rehashing and bits of foreshadowing maintain the intrigue for future chapters, well done. :)
VanFanle chapter 2 . 7/1/2013
Nice chapter. But you mixed up nee and nii. Nee is sister nii is brother. It should be Itchii-nii and Renai-nee.
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