Reviews for Chocopup
Akabane Karma chapter 1 . 4/19
NOOOOOO MELLOOOOOOO!

But even so, that was hilarious.

Off to go tell stories about the evil and insane Dr Yagami to small children XD I'm such a good role model for the new generation, am I not?
uhuhuhuhuhuhu chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
OH LOLOL MY GODD

"Doctor Yagami, we've got a code Complete DUMBASS here, I repeat, code Complete DUMBASS!"

I laughed so hard :'D

[poor crazy puppy :'( ]
ludicrousLemon chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Oh my god I KNOW you!

I was wondering why the crack story ending in a dog dying sounded familiar and then I read the comment realized it was you! (BTW You don't know me I'm a follower)
Althea Lynn chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
I now love Misa: "Doctor Yagami, we've got a code Complete DUMBASS here, I repeat, code Complete DUMBASS!". Beautiful. and just out of curiosity does Raito have a "Animal" Death Note?

Raito: *Matt leaves* and now because I'm the god of all animals and in the name of justice I will kill this poor tortured dog Michael! *cue maniacal laughter*

AL
321 chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
Lighting a cigarette, Mello reached into his furred vest pocket and pulled out the chocolate bar from before.

You mean 'Matt'?

Other than that, awesome story xD I loved Mikami as a dogg :DD
Thorn In Your Side chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
*gapes*

okay, first of all...HOW COULD YOU KILL THE DOG!

second of all, what is with you and turning characters into DOGS?

*is a little weirded out*

*but likes the story anyway*

raito that evil sonofagun.
Amiri chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
O_O

WHAT THE FLIPPIN' HECK WAS THAT ABOUT? YOU KILLED MELLO! XP DIE, EVIL ONE!
Snowy Lutia chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
I love seeing Mello acting like a he's pms-ing 24/7

"Mello watched in happiness as the cage’s door opened, and wagged his tail.

And then he realized he was supposed to be pissed."

Lol I get moods like that too.

Matt/Mello is great.
shampoo147 chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
Hahahhashahahahahahaha

That's f*ing messed up.
critical-blow chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
Oh... Oh my god. That was.. that was horrible! Light that bastard!

Poor Matt... D:

lol, I really enjoyed this fic. It had me laughing most of it except for when Mello died. XD
1876 chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
This is hilarious, I love it.
nellie330 chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
um y did the dog die?

nellie
They Call Me Soysauce chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
“Doctor Yagami, we’ve got a code Complete DUMBASS here, I repeat, code Complete DUMBASS!” I LOLed! xD

Yay crack! But poor Mello. *sniffle*
Painted-Purple chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
NO Mello! -crys- That was freaking great! Poor Mello thou . Still good thou. Wicket!

-PK
NormalAddict chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
Though it isn't NICE that the dog died, and especially when it's Mello of all people, I laughed my ass of. XD Thanks for the great fic!
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